Into the Machine - Dr.Ozi

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  • silentoath
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    FFR Music Producer
    • Jul 2008
    • 218

    #1

    Into the Machine - Dr.Ozi

    So to day i choked on a McDonalds fry, started laughing about it and re-choked on the same fry. That's talent.
    On another note this songs pretty dope and i hope you guys like it.

    http://soundcloud.com/dr-ozi/into-the-machine

    As always, free download is available on SC so scoop that up.

  • kommisar
    Dark Chancellor
    FFR Simfile Author
    FFR Music Producer
    • Jun 2005
    • 7328

    #2
    Re: Into the Machine - Dr.Ozi

    really nuts


    I feel like there should be more fill around :29. maybe some more wub? idk it feels really draggy and empty at that spot

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    • Coolboyrulez0
      VICES
      FFR Simfile Author
      FFR Music Producer
      • Aug 2006
      • 10042

      #3
      Re: Into the Machine - Dr.Ozi

      When i saw you posted another song i immediately got excited, sadly there are quite a few things i didnt enjoy here:

      - The drops seem to not have as much "umph" as they should, also they are quite repetitive and predictable.
      - The mastering seems off again, seems like everything is bitcrushed which sounds awful and some things seem to get buried and muddied in the mix at points.

      Otherwise:

      - I enjoyed the melody and overall happy feeling of this song.
      - Great noises/effects keep your attention.

      I would recommend changing the drops up some and maybe adding some more melodies to keep one's attention longer, also the mastering needs work :P

      Not one of your best works but good nonetheless. Maybe an EP/Album filler track ;]
      https://soundcloud.com/cbrbreakcore
      https://cbrrecords.bandcamp.com/

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      • silentoath
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        FFR Music Producer
        • Jul 2008
        • 218

        #4
        Re: Into the Machine - Dr.Ozi

        Thanks dude im glad u liked some of it, theres alot of bitcrusher being used. And thats prolly whats causing everything to sound alot less low. As for the drops, i kinda wanted them to be predictable because of the stompy style the song is in. But i can see where u hear it overlooped.

        But yeah man this is a good feedback! Il use what you said in the next song forsure thanks.

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        • Coolboyrulez0
          VICES
          FFR Simfile Author
          FFR Music Producer
          • Aug 2006
          • 10042

          #5
          Re: Into the Machine - Dr.Ozi

          Glad to be able to help out an awesome artist like you
          https://soundcloud.com/cbrbreakcore
          https://cbrrecords.bandcamp.com/

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          • who_cares973
            FFR Player
            • Aug 2006
            • 15407

            #6
            Re: Into the Machine - Dr.Ozi

            this is dope and im enjoying the sound very much. the title fits the track gj mang dowloaded

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