Horizontal Line (feat. Yasunori Mitsuda)
I've been toying around with raps lately, thanks in part to Kommisar. Tell me what you think.
I've been toying around with raps lately, thanks in part to Kommisar. Tell me what you think.
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Last edited by Arch0wl; 02-20-2011, 07:16 PM. -
Re: So I made a rap song
that was pretty cool. flow could use more, uh, flow but other than that i was pretty dope
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Haha awesome rap Arch0wl xd===============================
The idea that RDCP 3 may come out in the future is a fun thought to have~
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Re: So I made a rap song
The voices of the universe are making you it's bitch
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Re: So I made a rap song
lol this rap song
Sounds a bit monotonousOriginally posted by hi19hi19Comment
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Re: So I made a rap song
im pretty sure the aim was to be monotonousComment
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Re: So I made a rap song
haha this is very nice. I'd maybe suggest having a little more life in your voice? Kinda like eminem's sarcastic approach to lyrics. To be that monotonous you gotta be black :Pu look like shitComment
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Re: So I made a rap song
i'm bumpin this shit on my ipodMy beats for sale
I find an acapella of any song and i mix it with my beats
Originally posted by AldentronOriginally posted by smartdude1212Comment
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Re: So I made a rap song
Some of the words don't flow well, especially towards the ends of phrases. Kind of sounds like you used a program to say the words for you, especially with the monotonous speaking. Other than that it wasn't bad at all, I liked the instrumentation choices.Glorious Morning - Misc, level 48
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Re: So I made a rap song
keep it up man
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Re: So I made a rap song
Which phrases? Here are the lyrics, if it helps:
It's the importance of being earnest
Learn this before I castrate eviscerate and disembowel your pretentions
He mentions God doesn't play dice, what a shame
but I think it's great, because god likes heavy board games
Your life's deterministic and your choices aren't choices
they're voices of the universe making you its bitch
But you probably disagree; it's the just world bias
you're perceptually pious taking comfort in a lie
Go ahead, jump back -- go forth, deny
the rat pressing buttons for a piece of the pie
Another competitor on the pale blue dot
Going nutso wacko bonkers for a little bigger spot
So you watch some documentaries and connects some dots, woo
Society's not waiting to debut your point of view
It's not a sign intertwined aligned or benign
with your back supine witnessing the secrets unwind
It's not a signal of our sign of collapse
Our synapses running wild as the future begins to elapse
It's a glitch that you happened to stitch
into a meaningful pattern, now it's time to return -- time to learn
And so no force
however great
can stretch a cord
however fine
into a horizontal line
remaining absolutely straightComment
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