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  • flashpantss
    Party Hard
    • Aug 2006
    • 1310
    #1

    Hip Hop Beat (instrumental)

    A new song I have made. A Hip Hop beat That I have put together. Tell me what you think. Criticism would be great. (if you want to use it for something, you have permission)

    http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/381383
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    • SpookG
      (For Great Justice!)
      FFR Music Producer
      • Dec 2002
      • 829
      #2
      Re: Hip Hop Beat (instrumental)

      I just have a lot of trouble grooving to it. The leads feel too abrasive, instead of accentuating the rhythms more and I just, it's not head bobby and gets stale.

      But that's just me, maybe. I don't mean to come off overly harsh, and what bothers me about the song would be hard to explain in text.

      Whether that is something you want to improve upon, or don't care about, is up to you. We can talk off the board if you are interested.

      Royal For Great Justice! Electronic Music est. 1999
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        • flashpantss
          Party Hard
          • Aug 2006
          • 1310
          #3
          Re: Hip Hop Beat (instrumental)

          Originally posted by SpookG
          I just have a lot of trouble grooving to it. The leads feel too abrasive, instead of accentuating the rhythms more and I just, it's not head bobby and gets stale.

          But that's just me, maybe. I don't mean to come off overly harsh, and what bothers me about the song would be hard to explain in text.

          Whether that is something you want to improve upon, or don't care about, is up to you. We can talk off the board if you are interested.
          Well, i'm glad I got feedback. I can understand how it gets stale and not really a good beat to it. I'm still working on it, be expecting a revised version soon.
          10th in 5th Official Tournament in D3
          3RD in Dragons Fury: Custom Tournament #5 in D5A
          Best AAA's= Frictional Nevada (FIRST FGO) Kyrie (ONI Get), Eradication, Of Course you Need and nEed and neEd and NEED ME, Cinnamon Roll (FIRST TO AAA)

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            • V-Ormix
              Banned
              • Aug 2008
              • 4677
              #4
              Re: Hip Hop Beat (instrumental)

              Really cool, but it sounds a tad dirty, was this your intention? or did you not use any compression? but in any case I love that snare/clap you got going on its really sweet.
              oh and on a unrelated note: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/381446
              rainbows and cupcakes^ whatchyathinkofthatlulz. you'll probably hear the beginning and be like I don't even...

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                • flashpantss
                  Party Hard
                  • Aug 2006
                  • 1310
                  #5
                  Re: Hip Hop Beat (instrumental)

                  Originally posted by V-Ormix
                  Really cool, but it sounds a tad dirty, was this your intention? or did you not use any compression? but in any case I love that snare/clap you got going on its really sweet.
                  oh and on a unrelated note: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/381446
                  rainbows and cupcakes^ whatchyathinkofthatlulz. you'll probably hear the beginning and be like I don't even...
                  Yeah, its a tad dirty, messed up with the bass.

                  Rainbows and cupcakes, it pretty good. like the part with the intro of the synth.
                  10th in 5th Official Tournament in D3
                  3RD in Dragons Fury: Custom Tournament #5 in D5A
                  Best AAA's= Frictional Nevada (FIRST FGO) Kyrie (ONI Get), Eradication, Of Course you Need and nEed and neEd and NEED ME, Cinnamon Roll (FIRST TO AAA)

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                    • V-Ormix
                      Banned
                      • Aug 2008
                      • 4677
                      #6
                      Re: Hip Hop Beat (instrumental)

                      oh thank you

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