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  • iamgoodhehe
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    • Nov 2005
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    #1

    Trance/rave sort of style :)

    I just finished making a Trance/Rave style beat in FruityLoops, tell me what you think. Please listen to the entire song, thank you.*Constructive criticism


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    (quality will improve over time)
    Last edited by iamgoodhehe; 11-11-2010, 09:44 AM.
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    • iamgoodhehe
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      • Nov 2005
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      #2
      Re: Trance/rave sort of style

      ahh no comments

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        • alloyus
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          • Oct 2006
          • 3269
          #3
          Re: Trance/rave sort of style

          I'd listen if I had Facebook xP

          ^FFP_D0pey btw

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            • iamgoodhehe
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              • Nov 2005
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              #4
              Re: Trance/rave sort of style

              Originally posted by alloyus
              I'd listen if I had Facebook xP
              oh ****..lol

              adding youtube link..
              http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BPY8W2NmmgI
              Last edited by iamgoodhehe; 11-11-2010, 09:44 AM.

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                • alloyus
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                  • Oct 2006
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                  #5
                  Re: Trance/rave sort of style

                  *Is gonna sound lame because he knows nothing technical about music, but...* Although it appears to cut off really quickly at the end, it overall sounds nice xD
                  Last edited by alloyus; 11-11-2010, 10:49 AM.

                  ^FFP_D0pey btw

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                    • TC_Halogen
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                      • Feb 2008
                      • 19376
                      #6
                      Re: Trance/rave sort of style

                      I'm in the middle of uploading a video from my new ITG stepchart, but once that's finished, I'll give this a listen.

                      EDIT: It seems like there's no transitions from sections - instruments disappear abruptly. You might to do some EQing too because that clap is WAY overpowering (typical nature of a sweep-style clap like that one). Also, ending seems to cut off (lol youtube). Can't really think of much more to say, other than at least you have the guts to post one of your works...I know how to play with FL fairly well, but I'm -way- too shy to post anything on FFR. -___________-;;
                      Last edited by TC_Halogen; 11-11-2010, 12:41 PM.

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                        • DarkbearX
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                          • Feb 2006
                          • 1995
                          #7
                          Re: Trance/rave sort of style

                          The kick, bass, and lead all seem to clash with each other. Cutting some lows off of the kick an lead would help a lot, I bet. I like the clap, though it could probably use some variation. Personally, I'm really not a fan of supersaw leads, but that's just me. A lot of people like them, and a lot of people like the sound of low-pass filter sweeping on them, so you may as well take advantage of that in some way.

                          Overall, the tune is nice but the mix seems a bit unclear (muddy I guess). I'm pretty sure most of the problems stem from the fact that you have Soundgoodizer on your master track? I advise you to NEVER do that.
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                            • iamgoodhehe
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                              • Nov 2005
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                              #8
                              Re: Trance/rave sort of style

                              Originally posted by DarkbearX
                              The kick, bass, and lead all seem to clash with each other. Cutting some lows off of the kick an lead would help a lot, I bet. I like the clap, though it could probably use some variation. Personally, I'm really not a fan of supersaw leads, but that's just me. A lot of people like them, and a lot of people like the sound of low-pass filter sweeping on them, so you may as well take advantage of that in some way.

                              Overall, the tune is nice but the mix seems a bit unclear (muddy I guess). I'm pretty sure most of the problems stem from the fact that you have Soundgoodizer on your master track? I advise you to NEVER do that.
                              Thank you very much. I am a beginner and I'm learning very much. Thank you guys for all the constructive criticism.

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