My First Song

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  • NumiGamer
    FFR Player
    • Aug 2007
    • 337
    #1

    My First Song

    Just what the title says. I want feedback if possible. I wanna know what I did right and wrong. It's an attempt at a DnB track.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1F0ibywRHR4


    I know I could've improved timing for the intro drums. After I uploaded the song I caught that and it pissed me off.

    (BTW I would've used Newgrounds [In fact I did] but they take a while for your first audio submission to be accounted according to a screen I got right after submitting it almost two days ago.)
    Originally posted by tofurox;
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    • Cyanite
      SIT THE **** DOWN.
      FFR Simfile Author
      • Feb 2007
      • 1174
      #2
      Re: My First Song

      The melody didn't really sound like it went to any of the chords under it.

      I'd find better percussion samples before you try to make them the focal point of your tracks. Use hi-hat samples, just kicks and snares don't cut it. And stick with one kick and one snare sample per track for now, randomly going between different kicks and snares is just distracting.

      All things considered it's still pretty good for a first attempt.


      Originally posted by KgZ
      oh yeah girls love it when I stick my massive arm in their mouth

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        • NumiGamer
          FFR Player
          • Aug 2007
          • 337
          #3
          Re: My First Song

          Thanks for the feedback. Once I finished the song, I listened to it, and something seemed odd about it, but I couldn't really pinpoint what. I see what you're saying about that stuff. Thanks for the advice ^_^
          Originally posted by tofurox;
          Roflwagon

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