My first "real" 3D architecture assignment - Living room

**Dr Tran** · 10-30-2009, 04:34 PM

Re: My first "real" 3D architecture assignment - Living room

i remember making blueprints and adding all the furniture and windows using an architecture program. i miss high school ;_;

really awesome job but the tv is bugging the hell out of me but i dot know why

**Mythix** · 10-30-2009, 04:36 PM

Re: My first "real" 3D architecture assignment - Living room

Originally posted by Dr Tran

i remember making blueprints and adding all the furniture and windows using an architecture program. i miss high school ;_;

really awesome job but the tv is bugging the hell out of me but i dot know why

Prolly because I haven't added a metal texture or specular level on the gray part, nor the logo ^^ so it looks like a lego background with high gloss front, much.

**Dr Tran** · 10-30-2009, 04:38 PM

Re: My first "real" 3D architecture assignment - Living room

nah its not that

**Mythix** · 10-30-2009, 04:40 PM

Re: My first "real" 3D architecture assignment - Living room

Originally posted by Dr Tran

nah its not that

Then I give up. I'll make a CRT instead >:]

**mhss1992** · 10-30-2009, 04:48 PM

Re: My first "real" 3D architecture assignment - Living room

Wow, this is cool.

Well... One thing that I found weird was the image seen through the window. It seems like this apartment is several feet above the rest of the city...
The light that comes from out of the window is also a bit weird. Too intense, I think.
The plates have no shadows, why? They aren't really all that transparent. Maybe it's just their position...

I actually liked the curtains.

EDIT: Image in the mirror has different lighting, in the carpet. Unless it's an illusion.

**chidori!** · 10-30-2009, 04:51 PM

Re: My first "real" 3D architecture assignment - Living room

the 1st image the house looks like it's going to fall on the town

**Mythix** · 10-30-2009, 05:42 PM

Re: My first "real" 3D architecture assignment - Living room

Originally posted by chidori!

the 1st image the house looks like it's going to fall on the town

Thank you.

mhss: Impossible, it's 100% raytraced? I can't do but guess, and I'll go for it being segment shadow mode because of the DL system.

As for the carpet, I haven't done that yet.

**darkshark** · 11-3-2009, 01:59 PM

Re: My first "real" 3D architecture assignment - Living room

Mythix, sometimes instead of punching in real-world numbers into the program, and expecting them to look or behave like real-world attributes isn't enough, you've really got to mess around with settings until it looks right.

Redo your curtains, you need about 50 segments in each direction on that plane before you apply the cloth modifier, it would make it much less rigid looking.

Remove the background for now.

You need to setup global illumination, it's not hard to do at all, but render times will probably quadruple. I think GI would solve alot of your issues.

ps why is your ceiling glossy.

**foilman8805** · 11-3-2009, 02:56 PM

Re: My first "real" 3D architecture assignment - Living room

It appears to be night time, yet there is clearly a daylight like pattern across the floor.

**Spenner** · 11-3-2009, 03:13 PM

Re: My first "real" 3D architecture assignment - Living room

I love the drapery best, along with the ornaments on the table under the left curtain.

**Mythix** · 11-4-2009, 01:08 AM

Re: My first "real" 3D architecture assignment - Living room

Originally posted by foilman8805

It appears to be night time, yet there is clearly a daylight like pattern across the floor.

No worries I've created an outdoor system for it, and changed the background pictures, I'll upload the "new" room soon >:]

Spenner: I'm changing the curtains aswell, pretty much the same as now just alot more wrinkles.. Also, I'm going to add some more shiny stuff...

**abro13** · 11-4-2009, 08:57 AM

Re: My first "real" 3D architecture assignment - Living room

As darkshark said, the celing is really shiny. It shouldn't reflect light like that. Floor too, it's waaaay too shiny.
The plates on the table almost look like they're crystal, so you might want to redo the texture.
The left curtain looks a lot bigger than the right one, almost as if it were meant to hide the wall; it looks bunched up in the corner.
The shadows that show when each window pane ends is really skinny too. You'll probably want to make the shadows thicker.

EDIT: If it's night outside, there should be more light coming from the above lights than outside. City lights alone shouldn't make it that bright. Increase the brightness from the top and decrease it coming from outside. That should solve your light problems

**Mythix** · 11-4-2009, 10:45 AM

Re: My first "real" 3D architecture assignment - Living room

Originally posted by abro13

As darkshark said, the celing is really shiny. It shouldn't reflect light like that. Floor too, it's waaaay too shiny.
The plates on the table almost look like they're crystal, so you might want to redo the texture.
The left curtain looks a lot bigger than the right one, almost as if it were meant to hide the wall; it looks bunched up in the corner.
The shadows that show when each window pane ends is really skinny too. You'll probably want to make the shadows thicker.

EDIT: If it's night outside, there should be more light coming from the above lights than outside. City lights alone shouldn't make it that bright. Increase the brightness from the top and decrease it coming from outside. That should solve your light problems

No worries, I've changed the background, ceiling, tapestry, curtain and the floor.

**Mythix** · 11-4-2009, 10:48 AM

Re: My first "real" 3D architecture assignment - Living room

Originally posted by darkshark

Mythix, sometimes instead of punching in real-world numbers into the program, and expecting them to look or behave like real-world attributes isn't enough, you've really got to mess around with settings until it looks right.

Redo your curtains, you need about 50 segments in each direction on that plane before you apply the cloth modifier, it would make it much less rigid looking.

Remove the background for now.

You need to setup global illumination, it's not hard to do at all, but render times will probably quadruple. I think GI would solve alot of your issues.

ps why is your ceiling glossy.

It's 100*100 segments on those curtains. Any other ideas? Lol xD

Roof was shiny because I forgot that I detatched the polygons to use lume glow in mr., so I applied the same material as I did on the plates etc... Dun ask >:]

Working on light-hit glowing now. I -really- suck at making good lightning.

DS, do you know why I for some reason can't use sky portal? They appear as big black boxes when I apply them outside my windows. The lightning looks a billion times better considering they actually send out background lightning/colors, but they look like black boxes. My teacher has given up, on other scenes, they don't, but if I merge my scene to a new one, the problem persists.

EDIT: As for the curtains, and prolly some other stuff, I've applied no smoothing/ts/s.groups on this scene, I guess the drapery would look better. I've also changed the carpet on the floor, using the right modifier, and the 'mirrors' on the walls are now paintings. Of red balls. For no obvious reason.

My first "real" 3D architecture assignment - Living room

My first "real" 3D architecture assignment - Living room

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