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  • Best Marvy
    FFR Player
    • Sep 2008
    • 2

    #1

    What does this need?

    Well, okay. I'm new here and I have quite a few songs in the works.

    The main one I want advice on is first in the list, it's called "Circuit Breaker". I can't put a finger on what it needs. Anyone got any suggestions?

    [EDIT] oh, forgot the link. Here: http://www.myspace.com/rickylee2
  • Erothyme
    FFR Player
    • Jan 2008
    • 2033

    #2
    Re: What does this need?

    That's easy, actually.

    It needs a bassline, and probably some pads.

    And I would recommend cleaning up the low frequencies of everything else (aside from the kick) before including a bassline or it will end up as a lot of mud. 8D


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    • Best Marvy
      FFR Player
      • Sep 2008
      • 2

      #3
      Re: What does this need?

      Thanks, I'll try sticking one in and seeing how it sounds.

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      • Cyanite
        SIT THE **** DOWN.
        FFR Simfile Author
        • Feb 2007
        • 1174

        #4
        Re: What does this need?

        Some percussion that isn't 64th or 128th notes might be good too


        Originally posted by KgZ
        oh yeah girls love it when I stick my massive arm in their mouth

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        • LunaFFR
          FFR Player
          • Oct 2009
          • 12

          #5
          Re: What does this need?

          Oh my gosh I love your music <3
          I think the melody part could be a little cleaner sounding so it stands out better in some parts.
          Anyway, I'm not a music major or anything, but keep making your music. It's really cool and unique!! (:
          Dance
          Dance
          Revolution

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          • PhaeL v2
            FFR Player
            • Sep 2009
            • 942

            #6
            Re: What does this need?

            Less snare rushes. But you're doing a good job.
            Originally posted by Emo_Saur_
            Rapha, you're a cry baby!

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