just looking for some feedback, like it or not just tell me what you think.
the silence is deafening
so rare and surreal
a loss of a sense
such an odd way to feel
wanting to scream
but unable to break this moment
rendered completely mute
with no sign of refute
entirely entangled
by this new sense of being
no thoughts run through
as this silence grew
engrossing every last bit
of everything around where I sit
no thoughts
no sounds
only the smell of late spring
blossoming flowers,trees,bushes
carried effortlessly by the most wonderful breeze
flowing off the lake as if water itself
moving slowly but perfectly
so light it can't be heard
it counters the fire of the sun
down to more like embers at night
after a long day of fun
so unbelievably beautiful
all so relaxed
the silence is deafening
and I'm o.k. with that
the silence is deafening
so rare and surreal
a loss of a sense
such an odd way to feel
wanting to scream
but unable to break this moment
rendered completely mute
with no sign of refute
entirely entangled
by this new sense of being
no thoughts run through
as this silence grew
engrossing every last bit
of everything around where I sit
no thoughts
no sounds
only the smell of late spring
blossoming flowers,trees,bushes
carried effortlessly by the most wonderful breeze
flowing off the lake as if water itself
moving slowly but perfectly
so light it can't be heard
it counters the fire of the sun
down to more like embers at night
after a long day of fun
so unbelievably beautiful
all so relaxed
the silence is deafening
and I'm o.k. with that
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