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  • xferrarix
    FFR Player
    • Mar 2009
    • 1091

    #1

    poem :o

    this is a ver serious thread; got bored today and wrote this. basically means to keep your mind free.


    my soul, why does it feel as if its burning?
    so much pain, my stomach is churning
    emotions slow the mind and ease the spirit
    loosing the fear of heartbreak lifts the spirit
    slow the thoughts and you will forget
    what it means, check it in a antionette
    keep the soul free of sin
    feel the pain and let it all begin
    break free from those chains
    and begin to see life anew
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  • Serenthesis
    FFR Player
    • Aug 2009
    • 5

    #2
    Re: poem

    As jokes are not funny when explained, poems lose their mysteriousness when explained.
    You rhymed spirit with spirit!
    What am I doing?
    Interceding for god.

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