Days in Gensokyo as Seen Through My Eyes

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  • Remilia Scarlet
    FFR Player
    • Jun 2009
    • 3

    #1

    Days in Gensokyo as Seen Through My Eyes

    Myself: It's noon right now, maybe I'll go visit Reimu. Sakuya?
    Sakuya: *suddenly reveals herself* Yes, mistress?
    Myself: I'm going out for a walk, please take care of the mansion while I'm gone.
    Sakuya: I understand; why are you going out, by the way?
    Myself: Oh? I have some unfinished business with Reimu to attend to.
    Sakuya: Please tell me the end results, mistress.
    Myself: I'll be glad to.
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  • chidori!
    FFR Player
    • Jun 2007
    • 1603

    #2
    Re: Days in Gensokyo as Seen Through My Eyes

    well this seems more like it could be a doujin page

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