Jigsaw's OP!

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  • Congregate
    FFR Player
    • Jun 2009
    • 22

    #1

    Jigsaw's OP!

    This is kind of my test song. This is my first song with sound clips.



    Tell me what you think! And if anyone steps it and submits it i'll be very very grateful!

    Its called Jigsaw's OP, and its BPM = 140.

    EDIT: Or check it out at http://www.myspace.com/nathanmillerband
    Last edited by Congregate; 06-26-2009, 01:07 PM.
  • who_cares973
    FFR Player
    • Aug 2006
    • 15407

    #2
    Re: Jigsaw's OP!

    Intro is looooooooooooooong

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    • AniMeowzerz
      #TeamAnimal
      • May 2006
      • 318

      #3
      Re: Jigsaw's OP!

      The beginning really dragged on. And right after that you didnt keep an evil tone at all, I woulda rather seen that than some sort of cheesy techno.

      It's also too repetitive to be a stepfile, from what i see.


      But yeah, I liked the beginning up to 30 seconds then it kinda went downhill.

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      • Congregate
        FFR Player
        • Jun 2009
        • 22

        #4
        Re: Jigsaw's OP!

        I like the constructive criticism, Ill definatly cut down the beginning a little, then make my melodies minor.

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