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This definitely had some moments, friend.

Keep it up, you're improving.

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<3

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I liked it, what do you use.

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FL Studio and Ableton Live.

And thanks for the positive feedback guys, but what I really need is the negative feedback. I'd ask my mom if I just wanted to hear it was great :P

What's wrong with it?

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No, really, sounds greats... Sounds like you're doing a great job with the mastering, and I'm glad to hear something like this! There's a lot that I would love to compliment, but since you're looking for mostly 'negative' feedback, to help improve... Well...

I know the track isn't done, but from a DJ's perspective, I'd definitely recommend building up an intense intro, AT LEAST 30 seconds long, no more than 1:30...

When you have the track kind of pick up at :15 with the vocals and the extra synth, I would recommend introducing extra percussion, possibly on the offbeat of every kick to make the percussion fuller and such...

Maybe also side-chain the first synth you start off with, with the kick, to kind of bring it out more for the buildup...

Also, I'm previewing the track through my Sony V700 DJing headphones, and I'm hearing a nice bassline, but I feel like you could bring out the kicks just a TINY bit more to give it that extra oomph...

Also, use the vocals you have some more... You already have 'em in there, so play with them more, maybe for when you fine-tune your buildup...

Lastly, at :30 you bring in an effect or synth that's side-chained to the kick, but I'd recommend keeping that in there for the duration of a full :15 or :30 and building it up for the best drop... Up to you on the direction you wanna go...

But like you even said, at 2:00 and especially at 2:15 it just sounds WAYYY too busy, like you're bringing in everything you have just for the sake of bringing everything in at once...

But yeah. Those are all of my suggestions at least... But again, all in all, you're doing an amazing job, and I'm looking forward to more versions of the track, especially once completed...

Again, if you take my intro (and even outro) suggestion to heart, I will guarantee, with your permission, I'll drop this in some of my demo mix CD's as well as live PA at clubs...

Again. Keep up the great work!

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What do you mean by "offbeat?" The downbeat?

you're suggesting that I mm-tss-ah-tss? hahaha

EDIT: new version, see first post

http://www.sendspace.com/file/sxqk5y

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Yeah, meant the downbeat haha

But dooder, the file isn't working? Wrong link maybe?

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Damn, that's weird, it was working last night when I uploaded it. Let me reupload

edit: fuuuck mediafire is being retarded. I've uploaded it twice and gotten that same result, and the file is DEFINITELY in my files. here's a sendspace...

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Frankly Connor, i'm pretty sure if you asked your mom, she'd just yell at you and tell you your going into the military, and start bitching at you about how bad your family is(:

Nathan

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very nice its something id listen to more than once

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oh shut the **** up you little bitch lol we gotta chill sometime cuz

and thanks dude I got a new track up



it'd help me out if you guys could add me and ****, trying to get my music out there

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For sure.

Me too, its my better one... On the top.

Check it out.

I'm here too(:

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****ing threadjacker go away

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Thats right.