I need your opinion on my song

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I don't mean to be rude, but I'm not sure if you're pulling a William Hung or not...

What you are showing us is 1:04 in length. I wouldn't consider that a full song, perse.

As far as the actual substance of the track is concerned, there is a bass synth in the background, and then you have the same un-mastered ear-piercing synth throughout.

And that is all.

No buildups. No percussion. No fx. Nothing but those two synths. And maybe it's just me, but it almost sounds like then you start to have the synths layered at times, it almost sounds off-key.

If you really want suggestions, I would say listen to what type of music you're trying to shoot for, and jot down the differences in what you hear in an industry standard track you love, as compared to what you have just shown us.

Good to see you're wanting to get into making music, but you've got a long road full of learning to be had. Keep goin' at it!

Re: I need your opinion on my song

I have a different view from zajac on this.

I think it does sound quite mysterious and I could picture it being used as background music in a game, it's a little loud and hectic, it doesn't sound anywhere near finished, but I kind of like it.

A part of it reminded me of a game I used to play and whenever I think of it I feel like smashing my head against the wall because I can't play it anymore 8D

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Kids these days...

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^.^

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^.^

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sounds like a song from Cabin Fever

but the synths are just way to loud and just dont sound good to listen to =[

Re: I need your opinion on my song

yeah, thanks Adamaja456. ou took the words out of my mouth 8D

edit -

I just listened to it again and my god, it's horrible. It sounds like it's going to be okay, then it becomes horrible for a while, then it's okay, then horrible, then it ends with an ear-bleeding DDDRRINGGGG