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  • dore
    caveman pornstar
    FFR Simfile Author
    FFR Music Producer
    • Feb 2006
    • 6317
    #1

    Life

    A simple, yet loaded proposition
    Leaves me wondering what to do.
    "Yes" is harmless; "No" is harmless;
    Neither answer would change the world.
    Yet it would change my world.
    Does standing up for myself --
    Standing up against an addiction --
    Make the world any better?
    He will just find a way to get his fix
    Tomorrow or the next day,
    And the cycle will repeat itself.
    Why does it matter nothing positive
    Ever comes out of it?
    Why does it matter that it caused
    His lack of independence?
    Why wouldn't I bend my will
    To childish necessity?

    Saying "no" will not hurt tonight
    And it will not change tomorrow.
    But it will make me happier.
    Isn't that life?
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IREnpHco9mw
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    • DevilsTouch
      FFR Player
      • Apr 2009
      • 94
      #2
      Re: Life

      Does this have to do with peer pressure and drugs? Also imma add you on XBL man when i get my box back from repairs we can do w/e, depending on how much your on. Always nice to mingle with FFR and former FFR and sm players pce out
      Last edited by DevilsTouch; 05-22-2009, 12:25 AM. Reason: fix
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      Next couple of years are going to be the best in Xbox's history imo. SO MANY SICK GAMES COMING OUT!

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        • RawMeat786
          FFR Veteran
          • Apr 2007
          • 105
          #3
          Re: Life

          Sounds like a poem, but yet cool.

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            • Adamaja456
              Absurd
              • Dec 2006
              • 6433
              #4
              Re: Life

              i feel like i can relate to this. and i loved your last 4 lines.


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                • Darth Pegolous
                  FFR Player
                  • Apr 2008
                  • 41
                  #5
                  Re: Life

                  nice poem...

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                    • TheGreatDecay
                      FFR Player
                      • Feb 2007
                      • 154
                      #6
                      Re: Life

                      My only critique would be when you end both those lines with "world" right after each other. I understand you are trying to point out the different perspectives, but it just seems awkward to me.

                      I really like it though, it's nice to see a poem on here that is actually good.

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                        • Eeumi
                          FFR Veteran
                          • Mar 2009
                          • 170
                          #7
                          Re: Life

                          Originally posted by Adamaja456
                          i feel like i can relate to this. and i loved your last 4 lines.
                          Yeah they go well together. nice job
                          A woman without her man is nothing.
                          A woman, without her, man is nothing. That's called punctuation people, so use it.
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