This is my first love poem ever written; if your gonna hate don't. Negative critisizm is fine, but don't be rude or mean.
I remember, my darling, all your singular features
Your skin of pale white, your eyes of sharp blue.
Your hair was the most fair of all other creatures
From that first moment we met, I worshiped you
Your steps so light, so innocent, so full of grace
I knew that age would rob them of their spring
So I decided I must somehow preserve your face
To save you from the horror that years do bring
My darling, the maggots have taken your eyes
Their blue now replaced with deep pools of black
I’ve stayed by your side, so let the damn sun rise
I wait and I wish, darling, that I could have you back
The rot has all but stolen you, but my heart still squirms
I'll share you with no one, darling, no one but the worms.
I remember, my darling, all your singular features
Your skin of pale white, your eyes of sharp blue.
Your hair was the most fair of all other creatures
From that first moment we met, I worshiped you
Your steps so light, so innocent, so full of grace
I knew that age would rob them of their spring
So I decided I must somehow preserve your face
To save you from the horror that years do bring
My darling, the maggots have taken your eyes
Their blue now replaced with deep pools of black
I’ve stayed by your side, so let the damn sun rise
I wait and I wish, darling, that I could have you back
The rot has all but stolen you, but my heart still squirms
I'll share you with no one, darling, no one but the worms.
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