space girl & andrea

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  • she became me
    FFR Player
    • Apr 2009
    • 6

    #1

    space girl & andrea

    space girl.

    mother with quaking
    hands, i will come
    back from mars; but
    only if you let me go.



    andrea.

    balconies with a view of the sea,
    concrete jungles & clean nights
    after hurricanes. the east has taken
    you to sun-kissed lands with blue
    mountains.

    i wait.

    (i miss you.)



    feedback? c:
    Last edited by she became me; 05-13-2009, 08:07 PM.
  • mead1
    Cerebellumberjack
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Aug 2003
    • 3960

    #2
    Re: space girl & andrea

    I'm not certain enough of what this is supposed to be to dislike this, so I'm going to give it my approval. I can't figure out one bad thing to say about it, because I'm so goddamn confused by it.

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    • TC_llama499
      Resident Rock Climber
      • Feb 2008
      • 1573

      #3
      Re: space girl & andrea

      what?

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      • Tokzic
        FFR Player
        • May 2005
        • 6878

        #4
        Re: space girl & andrea

        i entirely agree with mead

        i don't see a scrap of meaning in either of these, and if there is one, it's extremely obfuscated

        makes me think of shrooms poetry

        Last edited by Tokzic: Today at 11:59 PM. Reason: wait what

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        • nuclearsamurai
          huehuehue
          • Jul 2007
          • 1211

          #5
          Re: space girl & andrea

          Originally posted by mead1
          I'm not certain enough of what this is supposed to be to dislike this, so I'm going to give it my approval. I can't figure out one bad thing to say about it, because I'm so goddamn confused by it.
          I'm going to have to agree here, because I really don't know what you're trying to get at with these.

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