space girl & andrea

Collapse
X
Collapse
 
  • Page of 1
  • Time
  • Show
Clear All
new posts
Previous template Next
  • she became me
    FFR Player
    • Apr 2009
    • 6
    #1

    space girl & andrea

    space girl.

    mother with quaking
    hands, i will come
    back from mars; but
    only if you let me go.



    andrea.

    balconies with a view of the sea,
    concrete jungles & clean nights
    after hurricanes. the east has taken
    you to sun-kissed lands with blue
    mountains.

    i wait.

    (i miss you.)



    feedback? c:
    Last edited by she became me; 05-13-2009, 08:07 PM.
    Tags: None
    • mead1
      Cerebellumberjack
      FFR Simfile Author
      • Aug 2003
      • 3960
      #2
      Re: space girl & andrea

      I'm not certain enough of what this is supposed to be to dislike this, so I'm going to give it my approval. I can't figure out one bad thing to say about it, because I'm so goddamn confused by it.

        Comment

        • TC_llama499
          Resident Rock Climber
          • Feb 2008
          • 1573
          #3
          Re: space girl & andrea

          what?

            Comment

            • Tokzic
              FFR Player
              • May 2005
              • 6878
              #4
              Re: space girl & andrea

              i entirely agree with mead

              i don't see a scrap of meaning in either of these, and if there is one, it's extremely obfuscated

              makes me think of shrooms poetry

              Last edited by Tokzic: Today at 11:59 PM. Reason: wait what

                Comment

                • nuclearsamurai
                  huehuehue
                  • Jul 2007
                  • 1211
                  #5
                  Re: space girl & andrea

                  Originally posted by mead1
                  I'm not certain enough of what this is supposed to be to dislike this, so I'm going to give it my approval. I can't figure out one bad thing to say about it, because I'm so goddamn confused by it.
                  I'm going to have to agree here, because I really don't know what you're trying to get at with these.

                    Comment

                    Previous template Next
                    Working...