Vines (amateur poetry)

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  • Devour
    FFR Player
    • Sep 2007
    • 253

    #1

    Vines (amateur poetry)

    Your greedy implications are no disguise,
    Yet I fall to my knees while you arise
    You rip off my days on a sturdy occasion,
    Pitiful attempts of helpless evasion

    You've grown in with the roots of my being,
    You are the nightmares that I've been seeing;
    Leeching away the fuel of my soul,
    Slowly we've slipped out of control

    Inevitably we become ruthlessly entwined,
    Webs of insecurities foolishly combined;
    Become my impossible, losing touch,
    The obstacles have been just too much

    Innocent compassion, wretchedly abloom,
    Growing its way to weeping doom;
    The futile cries of the heart as it dies,
    Are unheard amongst the final goodbyes.
  • DevilsTouch
    FFR Player
    • Apr 2009
    • 94

    #2
    Re: Vines (amateur poetry)

    I really enjoyed that . I dont know much about poetry though sry. I might have go to the literature section more often . Pretty fun to read these.
    Last edited by DevilsTouch; 05-21-2009, 11:30 PM. Reason: Grammar
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    • hi_top
      FFR Veteran
      • Jul 2007
      • 1427

      #3
      Re: Vines (amateur poetry)

      I really like the imagery in this piece.

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