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  • Mans0n
    Sun and Stars
    FFR Music Producer
    • Sep 2006
    • 2907
    #1

    Need some feedback

    ON this song I started for my Moms friend Crystal, she asked me to make her a song since she knew i make music. So here's what I have so far. I need some decent criticism and ideas on where to make the song go. any ideas or advice is welcome, thank you FFR.

    http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/230132

    ok ive been working on it for some time now heres an updated version, sound better? I think so personally.
    http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/234133
    Last edited by Mans0n; 04-29-2009, 05:15 PM.
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    • championanwar
      Ask Nuro! x3
      FFR Simfile Author
      FFR Music Producer
      • Jun 2004
      • 2588
      #2
      Re: Need some feedback

      It didn't really have anything for me to grasp. It has the potential to develop into a good tune, and I like the concept. There were small melodic elements that I picked up - but they wern't that strong enough.
      As a start, it's good - but imo you got some work to do

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        • zajac
          aka uAnimals
          FFR Music Producer
          • Aug 2003
          • 4050
          #3
          Re: Need some feedback

          Yeah just sounds like an intro to a track thought when done should be about 6+ min long... Keep it up and we'll be able to give more criticism when there is something to criticize :P
          Originally posted by Spec & Aperson
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            • Djr Rap dancer
              FFR Veteran
              • May 2008
              • 409
              #4
              Re: Need some feedback

              The Cristal back grounds remember me the song "illumination of the sky" but in the cheeps way.
              You should put more sounds in yours song.
              This is my idea.


              "Don't do this..."
              "Don't do what?"

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                • Mans0n
                  Sun and Stars
                  FFR Music Producer
                  • Sep 2006
                  • 2907
                  #5
                  Re: Need some feedback

                  http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/234133 is the updated version ive added more elements. tell me what you think? PLEASE
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                    • Mans0n
                      Sun and Stars
                      FFR Music Producer
                      • Sep 2006
                      • 2907
                      #6
                      Re: Need some feedback

                      thanks for the adcive will do. and will update when its alot longer, peace
                      im gigin
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                        • Erothyme
                          FFR Player
                          • Jan 2008
                          • 2033
                          #7
                          Re: Need some feedback

                          Is your mom's friend into minimal? :V


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