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  • MetalAtlas
    FFR Veteran
    • Aug 2007
    • 1691

    #1

    A little writing

    A Glimmer of Sorrow

    A broken and battered soul
    Underneath a bruised and bloodied heart
    Animate feeling hardened to coal
    A life now torn apart

    Eyes like glass, stomach like lead
    Hands clawing at the throat of inevitable
    A second's pass, our daily bread
    Prepares us not for the incredible

    Life seems almost too much to bare
    Love found, love gained, love lost, love stained
    Dries our tears and leaves its glare
    Misery mocks our pitiful restrain

    Somehow, somewhere lies a glimmer of hope
    A quick and heavenly glint of the eye
    While the hands of sorrow still grope
    Wherein the newly blackened hearted lie

    Sometimes even the darkened of mind
    Can be tainted and cracked open eggshell white
    Even a tiny shining sliver can find
    That where happiness shines oh so slight

    Henceforth the battle of light and dark
    The wails of agony and the songs of lovebirds
    Scarring life, leaving mark
    Clash into ill forgotten words

    I love you, I hate you
    I miss you, i loath you
    I need you, I own you
    I have you, i lost you
    I am whole, i am nothing
    I am strong, i am helpless
    I am one, i am many
    i am alone
    I am never alone

    And a glint in the eye become a shining beacon
    To all who are love lost, all who are life lost
    To the answers of life to which those are seeking
    Of the neglegent paths that we never crossed
    Of the sorrow filled rivers that are often leaking
    To the memories of forgotten happiness never tossed-


    The shimmering image of a heart is winking



    All Eternity

    Now that heart that had been wrapped so tight,
    Can loosen its grasp,forsee the light
    It searched for love so longingly,
    I love you i still love you for all eternity

    An angels light opened my heart,
    Taught me new things, gave me a fresh start
    Our close bond had been been so forsakenly,
    I love you i still love you for all eternity

    Desperate times called for desperate measures,
    Trying to hold close to all of my treasures
    Holding them high for the world to see,
    I love you i still love you for all eternity

    Perhaps moving too fast, perhaps moving too slow,
    But completely devoted from the get go
    I just tried to be the best that I could be,
    I love you I still love you for all eternity

    A future so clear and a future so bright,
    The world's harsh reality calmed by starry night
    A perfect haven never just a possibility,
    I love you I still love you for all eternity

    Alas the skies cast down its hazing glare,
    My treasures taken as only I can stare
    It seems the inevitable happens eventually
    But I love you i still love you for all eternity

    It is said that time heals all wounds,
    And the wolf's cries howling over many moons
    Often say that what is is what should never be,
    But I love you i still love you for all eternity

    I suppose one has to hope that love stays on track,
    And that somehow loved ones find there way back
    And remember those whispered words, an everlasting decree,
    "I love you, I'll always love you for all eternity "

    oh and would anyone be interested in reading resident evil4 fanfiction lol XD
    As life gets longer, awful feels softer and it feels pretty soft to me. And if it takes **** to make bliss well I feel pretty blissfully. If life's not beautiful without the pain, well I'd rather never even ever see beauty again. As life gets longer, awful feels softer, and it feels pretty soft to me.
  • -paexaea-
    ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
    • Apr 2007
    • 4610

    #2
    Re: A little writing

    I like your writing style. However, it still needs more murder curse.
    See you, Space Cowboy.

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    • mead1
      Cerebellumberjack
      FFR Simfile Author
      • Aug 2003
      • 3960

      #3
      Re: A little writing

      Originally posted by MetalAtlas
      oh and would anyone be interested in reading resident evil4 fanfiction lol XD
      <*-*> yes yes please

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      • MetalAtlas
        FFR Veteran
        • Aug 2007
        • 1691

        #4
        Re: A little writing

        Originally posted by mead1
        <*-*> yes yes please
        lol ok post here or pm cause i dunno which to do-
        As life gets longer, awful feels softer and it feels pretty soft to me. And if it takes **** to make bliss well I feel pretty blissfully. If life's not beautiful without the pain, well I'd rather never even ever see beauty again. As life gets longer, awful feels softer, and it feels pretty soft to me.

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        • mead1
          Cerebellumberjack
          FFR Simfile Author
          • Aug 2003
          • 3960

          #5
          Re: A little writing

          As the addicts revel in their own addictions,
          and the old men profit from the addicts afflictions,
          and a young woman digs in a dumpster for lunch,
          and a man beats his wife because he loves his mistress too much,
          and a pharmacist slips pain-killers under his jacket,
          for five dollars a pop to the teenage drug racket,
          and homeless sleep in the warmth of flaming trash cans
          with four-dollar merlot clutched tight in frozen hands
          and teenage muggers hide pistols beneath coats of black
          and men stare longingly at children, planning their attack
          as this city of sin sings a song that never ends,
          I slit her throat knowing that I’m among friends.

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          • MetalAtlas
            FFR Veteran
            • Aug 2007
            • 1691

            #6
            Re: A little writing

            wicked good but like scary dude lol
            As life gets longer, awful feels softer and it feels pretty soft to me. And if it takes **** to make bliss well I feel pretty blissfully. If life's not beautiful without the pain, well I'd rather never even ever see beauty again. As life gets longer, awful feels softer, and it feels pretty soft to me.

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