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  • Renevatia
    FFR Veteran
    • Feb 2006
    • 555
    #1

    Some japanese girls

    tried new style AGAIN, but thankfully only took couple hrs to get somewhat familiar with since it's close to how trad. art is done.

    crits/comments = thx


    Ayumi Hamasaki (first attempt)


    Aya Hirano (second attempt)


    will try scenery soon, but they look epically time consuming

    suggest me scenery pix here also, for me to draw

    I am drawing directly from ref because I am not familiar with how things look in reality yet..so don't kill me on that part xD

    image somewhat related

    same style with scenery..really kills patience
    need moar detail

    btw this is a place called 九份 (jiou fen) in Taiwan, just in case if anyone is bored and wants some trivial info.

    don't feel like making new thread so just gonna continue here


    STYLE MERGES

    here is kyoani style..well, basics without most of the fancy glares and light color gradient

    k-on <3

    Taking kyoani and merging with my original style

    akiyama <3 rofl

    Taking hybrid kyoani and merging with my wannabe realism with paint methods

    miku is sad D:


    next will be attempting to add korean char. art style (those fancy game art with epic muscle structures) on top of this..not sure if that works
    Last edited by Renevatia; 04-15-2009, 05:23 AM.
    Reminder for self to make new sig.
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    • 1mpuls3
      Impulsive By Nature
      • Jul 2007
      • 340
      #2
      Re: Some japanese girls

      they are very good.


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        • Necros140606
          FFR Player
          • Jun 2006
          • 1088
          #3
          Re: Some japanese girls

          both are very realistic, the first one overrides the second though.

          oh. by the way, which tools do you use for your works?

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            • makdaddy
              FFR Veteran
              • Mar 2003
              • 1688
              #4
              Re: Some japanese girls

              brilliant as always.

              The first one is the best, love the lighting

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                • bluguerrilla
                  FFR Player
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  • Apr 2006
                  • 3966
                  #5
                  Re: Some japanese girls

                  Is it just me or do the lips seem weird in both (especially the top lip of the 2nd one). It's probably just the lighting or something.

                  The nostrils on the second also seem too dark.

                  Some of the brush strokes seem too... obvious. I don't know if you did this on purpose. If so then whatever, it's not super distracting or anything. If not then make them less obvious.

                  They look really good, though!

                  PS I'm by no means an authority on what looks good or what it should be, these are just opinions, disregard them as you will.

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                    • ShAiOnEi
                      FFR Player
                      • May 2007
                      • 1110
                      #6
                      Re: Some japanese girls

                      Wow nice you managed to recreate two really hot Japanese girls.
                      I love my son Auron

                      Epic thread killer

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                        • nuclearsamurai
                          huehuehue
                          • Jul 2007
                          • 1211
                          #7
                          Re: Some japanese girls

                          These are really impressive.

                          I want your hands. ;_;

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                            • AOD_ELEMENT
                              FFR Player
                              • Jan 2007
                              • 1672
                              #8
                              Re: Some japanese girls

                              wow those look good

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                                • Ruritsu
                                  FFR Player
                                  • Mar 2008
                                  • 479
                                  #9
                                  Re: Some japanese girls

                                  Awesome style, I want to see the landscapes though, 'cause I think they'll be a lot cooler so if you will ^^
                                  =__=' My sig was 22 pixels too tall, so this is here instead...

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                                    • Spenner
                                      Forum User
                                      • Nov 2006
                                      • 2403
                                      #10
                                      Re: Some japanese girls

                                      Very nice job. The only thing that's bugging me is that on the first picture there's a line to the left of the mouth that seems just so out of place. If it needs to be there, I'd make it less significant, because that's a turnoff for my eyes.

                                      Other than that there's a few minor picky things such as dark spots or inconsistencies with strokes, but very nice work.

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                                        • GG_Guru
                                          Let em' do what they want
                                          • Mar 2006
                                          • 3219
                                          #11
                                          Re: Some japanese girls

                                          Very nice!

                                          Texture: 5/5

                                          Detail: 4.9/5 (the lips do need some work)

                                          Color: 5/5

                                          Overall they are both outstanding portraits of the typical japanese girl.

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                                            • Renevatia
                                              FFR Veteran
                                              • Feb 2006
                                              • 555
                                              #12
                                              Re: Some japanese girls

                                              Originally posted by Ruritsu
                                              Awesome style, I want to see the landscapes though, 'cause I think they'll be a lot cooler so if you will ^^
                                              post some scenery you might wish to see painted then :P

                                              Originally posted by Necros140606
                                              both are very realistic, the first one overrides the second though.

                                              oh. by the way, which tools do you use for your works?
                                              layers, paintbrush, eraser burn tool and dodge tool(rarely dodge though)
                                              these are on photoshop

                                              i might try out painter again sometime in the near future

                                              and ya, the first one was a really interesting picture for ref though, a very professionally taken photo (imo) , and the second one is just a random snap shot she took her self xD
                                              Last edited by Renevatia; 04-7-2009, 03:34 PM.
                                              Reminder for self to make new sig.

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                                                • funmonkey54
                                                  The Chill Keeper
                                                  • Oct 2007
                                                  • 4127
                                                  #13
                                                  Re: Some japanese girls

                                                  Wow, you really have a lot of talent for this.

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                                                    • tofurox
                                                      Them arrows.
                                                      • May 2006
                                                      • 2263
                                                      #14
                                                      Re: Some japanese girls

                                                      INSANE!

                                                      This sig has been enhanced by the FFR Staff for being too large. Thank you for participating.

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                                                        • Kikiyo1313
                                                          FFR Player
                                                          • Mar 2009
                                                          • 1
                                                          #15
                                                          Re: Some japanese girls

                                                          the music i play on here is awsome, but some can be tricky!

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