I made a song

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  • Magic_V2
    RobMagic
    • Jun 2006
    • 638
    #1

    I made a song

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2PoHjWPby5U&fmt=18


    If yous guys would check it out and C&C, I'd be very grateful to hear opinions. I've been using FL for a few weeks and just recently got around to watching tutorials. I don't consider myself GOOD, but I like to listen to my own music so that's what really matters I suppose.

    Edit: I see the people viewing my thread and am prepared for the worst
    Last edited by Magic_V2; 03-1-2009, 08:10 PM. Reason: idk

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    • zajac
      aka uAnimals
      FFR Music Producer
      • Aug 2003
      • 4050
      #2
      Re: I made a song

      In reality it's not all that bad when it comes down to the melody and the harmony of the track, gotta give you props there...

      As far as making yourself better, I would say that the drum sequence and percussion needs to be better with more drum samples kind of 'filling the track' so to speak, and layer drums together to sound fuller... That and that dreary synth in the background, you should either chain with your kicks, or do it manually, so you have that kick synth kick synth sound...

      The synths in general should have some more reverb with barely cutting the highs out a bit so they dont sound so screatchy...

      Then having buildups throughout the track etc etc

      Really. It was not bad at all. Just keep practicing and keep listening to more music, your talent is there, it'll just reveal itself more and more with due time

      Good job.
      Originally posted by Spec & Aperson
      We Rate You: Cool Motherfucer. 9/10

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        • Magic_V2
          RobMagic
          • Jun 2006
          • 638
          #3
          Re: I made a song

          Well thank you zajac, that means very much coming from such an accomplished DJ!
          I will definitely look into bettering my sounds by means of your suggestions !

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