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  • OrganisM
    FFR Player
    • Oct 2006
    • 2644

    #1

    Some poems

    I thought I'd contribute some poems I've written, just for fun. If any of you consider this thread unjustified, just lock it.

    The Green Fairy


    Liquid fire, heart's desire
    The fairy's siren song
    Lift me up and take me higher
    Won't be long before I'm gone
    Ardent yearning lips of liars
    Tease me, strip me with your taunts
    Consumed in rapture, deathly mired
    You know what it is I want
    Corrupt my spirit, taint my soul
    Tempt me, taste me, swallow me whole
    Split me, break me, take your toll
    Give me back what lovers stole
    Make me yours, devour me sweetly
    Rip me, shred me, tear me neatly
    Graceful and elegant, my darling girl
    You encompass my entire world
    End of eras, death of ages
    Make proud fools of gods and sages
    Enter my mind and become one with me
    Teach me beauty and set me free

    Inkblot

    Drowning in a frozen sea of apathy
    I cannot speak, I cannot breathe
    Melting into a blot of ink
    'Til there is nothing left of me
    Cascading, crushing, crumbled reality
    Learn to look and you will see
    The meaning of finality
    A thing of beauty
    In every atom of everything

    Consumerica

    Welcome to the digital ageless century
    Living the hi-def caviar dream
    Imbued with taste for the finer things
    Riding the tides of data streams
    Rotted to the core while the surface gleams
    Dazzling our collective eyes
    Rewriting our obsolete nucleotides
    Succumbing to defective lives
    Now what have we become?
    Fools who've paid for paradise

    Once we were the galaxy's envy
    There's been a mistake and we've grown too many
    Now existing to defy the error
    Based on ever-present shapeless terror
    And now we've come to form but echoes of a laugh.

    Luminous, discordant, detached society
    Drinking our humanity away
    Laughing in the face of sobriety
    Sacrificing tomorrow for today
    Convert, transcode, revise, reload
    Remove the cause for all our woes
    Is it truth if no one knows?
    Held captive by the lights and glow
    Ironic proof you'll never know
    What happened many years ago.

    Manufacture wants and needs
    Replace debate and plant the seeds
    Erode the human condition with what's on TV screens
    Not everything is always what it seems
    Trade in bombs for stocks and bonds
    Entrap yourself in endless greed

    We want you to be consumed
    Because that's what good citizens do
    Freedom or security? It's time to choose
    You want the truth yet we owe nothing to proof
    We've got nothing to lose
    Profit is our prophet and we're coming after you!

    Go to bed, shut up, lay down
    Erase that silly little frown
    Assimilate now or prepare to drown
    Destroy our perfection and we will PUT YOU DOWN.

    Welcome to our Company, little buddy! We're gonna make a good little consumer out of you.

    Photocopy

    Print it send it, twice divide it
    Check it, proof it, then rewrite it
    Send it through the copy machine
    Watch it come out fresh and clean
    A perfect replica pristine
    Just like our society

    Revel in the mind of a photocopy
    A paper jam's when the bombs are dropping
    Reset, return, redo and readopt mediocrity
    Nothing can stop the way we process things
    Drawing a blank when the ink runs out
    No matter what you do when you scream and shout
    Nobody can stand up to the mighty collective
    Destruction of inventive by methods preventive
    We're running out of paper and the printer's breaking
    We've got another company purchase in the making
    It's time for a new photocopy machine
    To clean from our spirits what was once ours to keep.

    Lack of Logic
    You ruin me with cheap semantics
    Sense escapes you, phrases magic
    Your lack of logic I find tragic
    You want it all but you can't have it
    These words of yours cause endless pain
    It's sticks and stones, let's play a game
    Burn my synapses and break my mind
    I'm not the only one you'll find
    Who takes your lies for what they are
    But this time you've just gone too far.

    Situations lead temptations down a dark and dismal path
    You've provoked and brought upon yourself my fury and my wrath
    That lack of judgment that you have makes your conscience laugh
    Such an easy thought process, yet you can't do the math.

    Lover's Waltz

    She dances with me intimately
    As her body shakes and shivers rhythmically
    Snaps and quivers with blistering speed
    Tears down my foundations so precisely
    Flying 'cross the stage she's soaring
    The look upon her face imploring
    Inviting me into exploring her world
    Her eyes, they shine like midnight pearls
    Stripping clothes as layers unfurl
    Drink a drop of lover's potion
    Absorb the heart of your emotion
    Letting go of all my pride
    Forgetting all the hate inside
    Remembering the meaning of devotion

    Tracing patterns down your spine
    We're making love in 3/4th's time
    Our souls and bodies intertwine
    Your satin touch is like a lifeline
    Love like this don't cost a dime

    In between the sheets we're dancing
    Look at what a mess we've made
    Morning coming starts to fade
    Be my heart and be my shade
    You alone can make my heart sing
    You could be my everything






    Alright, so those are just a few of my poems from the last few years. /shrug

    comment and critique if you want, but they're just little spurts of thought.
    Last edited by OrganisM; 02-26-2009, 11:41 AM.
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    "If you get stung by enough bees you turn into a bee,
    because the venom gets into the blood stream which
    spreads bee DNA throughout your entire body...
    changing your genetic structure into a bee's.

    Every year roughly 125 people in America are turned into bees this way."


    Originally Posted by
    MrRubix[link]:
    "Do you basically bukkake-paint your walls every time you jack it?"

    Originally Posted by All_That_Chaz[link]:
    "My pity-sex depreciates at a rate of 5% annually."
  • dore
    caveman pornstar
    FFR Simfile Author
    FFR Music Producer
    • Feb 2006
    • 6317

    #2
    Re: Some poems

    line break =/= punctuation

    With that said, you have a pretty robust vocabulary which leads to some interesting turns of phrase and overall good reading. I enjoyed Inkblot the most for some reason.

    but seriously use punctuation
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IREnpHco9mw

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    • Verruckter
      FFR Player
      • Apr 2004
      • 2707

      #3
      Re: Some poems

      I liked the first one, but it felt as though the rhythmic wasn't quite there. Some words were breaking the flow of what could have been something much more interesting.

      IMO of course.
      Truth lies in loneliness, When hope is long gone by -Blind Guardian, The Soulforged
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      • OrganisM
        FFR Player
        • Oct 2006
        • 2644

        #4
        Re: Some poems

        Originally posted by dore
        line break =/= punctuation

        With that said, you have a pretty robust vocabulary which leads to some interesting turns of phrase and overall good reading. I enjoyed Inkblot the most for some reason.

        but seriously use punctuation
        Yeah, like I said, just quick notes, most of them. Inkblot is actually part of a song I've written and am including in my first album.

        I should have thought this through, most of these aren't my best poems.. :P
        .

        Originally Posted by jewpinthethird[link]:
        "If you get stung by enough bees you turn into a bee,
        because the venom gets into the blood stream which
        spreads bee DNA throughout your entire body...
        changing your genetic structure into a bee's.

        Every year roughly 125 people in America are turned into bees this way."


        Originally Posted by
        MrRubix[link]:
        "Do you basically bukkake-paint your walls every time you jack it?"

        Originally Posted by All_That_Chaz[link]:
        "My pity-sex depreciates at a rate of 5% annually."

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        • revolutionomega
          FFR Veteran
          • Mar 2006
          • 2240

          #5
          Re: Some poems

          Lots of sex references o.o
          As a poet/song-writer myself I liked it a lot!
          "AW MAN, WE SUCK AGAIN!"
          - Rob Schneider, The Waterboy (1998)

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          • kitkat9
            FFR Player
            • Feb 2009
            • 87

            #6
            Re: Some poems

            I really like Green Fairy, Lack of Logic, and Lovers Waltz. They were all very interesting. But with Cunsumerica you kind of lost me. I did really like your style of writing though =)

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