A Very Short Movie I Made

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  • hoochan
    woah shrooms
    • Nov 2005
    • 3838
    #1

    A Very Short Movie I Made

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=prWuaYFV770


    I had to do this for a class. I originally had a lot more going into it but time screwed me over. Tell me what you think, I guess.
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    • dandandamdandan1111
      the baker man
      • Jun 2007
      • 2176
      #2
      Re: A Very Short Movie I Made

      what

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        • Phynx
          I'm Forever
          • Mar 2007
          • 3003
          #3
          Re: A Very Short Movie I Made

          Meh, the directors line seems to have been crossed a few times, composition COULD have been better but it's acceptable for high school standards. Also in terms of plot presentation... I'm kinda lost, is this about the kid disappearing after he gets knocked down?

          EDIT - What was the running for lol, I missed dialogue at the beginning if their was supposed to be any.
          Guardin' of the Scared Shrine

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            • NFD
              FFR Player
              • Nov 2007
              • 4715
              #4
              Re: A Very Short Movie I Made

              Everybody likes The Who.

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                • Syhto
                  BuMP it
                  • Mar 2006
                  • 2466
                  #5
                  Re: A Very Short Movie I Made

                  I think there was a lot of running involved
                  Originally posted by ~jrodd
                  keep ur head up or down whatevers most comfortable idk but ya i repsect u cuz u respect others and we all have opinions to share, so respect one another and keep being urself or someone else watever
                  Originally posted by ~Tao of Dossar
                  I never self-reflect, and therefore, I have no negative thoughts about myself. However I am also aware about my successes.

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                    • Xx{neon}xX
                      FFR Player
                      • Dec 2007
                      • 500
                      #6
                      Re: A Very Short Movie I Made

                      i was just surprised your water fountain worked none in my school do :/
                      Originally posted by [TeRa]
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                        • CapnSkyOsiris
                          FFR Player
                          • Jul 2007
                          • 344
                          #7
                          Re: A Very Short Movie I Made

                          My college was new and the water tasted like pipes.

                          If you were going for camera angles and shots, then it's alright...but yea otherwise I totally don't get it.

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                            • OrganisM
                              FFR Player
                              • Oct 2006
                              • 2644
                              #8
                              Re: A Very Short Movie I Made

                              Maybe it makes more sense on drugs. Brb, taking drugs.
                              .

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                                • Sh4d0wD3v1L
                                  FFR Player
                                  • Jan 2005
                                  • 693
                                  #9
                                  Re: A Very Short Movie I Made

                                  Originally posted by Syhto
                                  I think there was a lot of running involved

                                  "And I ran......I ran so far away....."
                                  Funny stuff goes in this area right?

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                                    • Verruckter
                                      FFR Player
                                      • Apr 2004
                                      • 2707
                                      #10
                                      Re: A Very Short Movie I Made

                                      Running has never looked less convincing.
                                      Truth lies in loneliness, When hope is long gone by -Blind Guardian, The Soulforged
                                      Image removed for size violation.

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