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  • Cyanite
    SIT THE **** DOWN.
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Feb 2007
    • 1174
    #1

    Aquatopia (Original Mix) WIP -- Feedback needed

    Finished: http://www.tindeck.com/listen/qehv

    I'm preparing an EP soon, which is going to feature a few mixes/remixes of this song. This is, I believe, the 9th mix of this song I've made so far, and this is going to be the last.

    I really need criticism on this. Every single thing you guys can pick apart about this song, in any aspect, I'd really appreciate hearing and trying to fix. I've been told already that the intro is a bit long by KgZ, which I'll be working on soon.

    But seriously, please let me know what you think of this, positive and negative.
    Last edited by Cyanite; 02-10-2009, 03:10 PM.


    Originally posted by KgZ
    oh yeah girls love it when I stick my massive arm in their mouth
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    • tofurox
      Them arrows.
      • May 2006
      • 2263
      #2
      Re: Aquatopia (Original Mix) WIP -- Feedback needed

      I liked it for the most part, it just seemed too... Windows Welcome Musicy at that start, in the sence that it takes forever for anything interesting to happen. I know you know that already, but really thats the only thing. For realz. I love the end!

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        • Sgtzombie.
          FFR Player
          • Jan 2009
          • 134
          #3
          Re: Aquatopia (Original Mix) WIP -- Feedback needed

          Ok, first I listened to it through my laptop speakers, and I thought to myself... this isn't going anywhere and I'm only hearing 2 chord changes. Then I listened to it through my headphones, and yey! Bass! I liked the intro, but it didn't break into much, and there are still only two chords. I think it would be pretty nifty if there were lyrics with this song, just to give it something else? To me it's a good backing track for something, but it's a tad monotonous... unless that's what you were going for.
          I'm halfway through the track right now, I like how it's changed, unless the first half of the track was just the intro, then yes it is to long. But to me it still sounds like a backing track, a little less when the second melody kicks in, but it's got potential for lyrics. But the two chords is still bugging me... and now it just stopped. I was just getting into that. ):
          Eh.

          P.S. It was pretty damn good.
          Last edited by Sgtzombie.; 02-9-2009, 06:29 AM.
          BIG, OBNOXIOUS, ORANGE TEXT

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            • Cyanite
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              • Feb 2007
              • 1174
              #4
              Re: Aquatopia (Original Mix) WIP -- Feedback needed

              The song is built off of two chords, that's not really unusual for a trance track, especially the section before the breakdown.

              I never really considered changing up the chords.. I might be able to once the piano melody comes in, which could be interesting.

              Thanks


              Originally posted by KgZ
              oh yeah girls love it when I stick my massive arm in their mouth

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                • Dvaerak7Korgo
                  魂氣 혼기 (Wandering Spirit)
                  • Jan 2007
                  • 93
                  #5
                  Re: Aquatopia (Original Mix) WIP -- Feedback needed

                  I thought it sounded pretty.

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                    • Adamaja456
                      Absurd
                      • Dec 2006
                      • 6433
                      #6
                      Re: Aquatopia (Original Mix) WIP -- Feedback needed

                      the second half of the song was amazing. i would personally take out the first minute or so of the song so you dont have to wait as long for the epic ending. i absolutely LOVED those snare rolls(not sure if thats what they're called). I would of liked to hear maybe one or two more but you had them in the right places so i dont know if adding an extra would help the song or not.

                      overall it was a strong piece. once you go back and fix it up a little, ill download


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                        • Cyanite
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                          • Feb 2007
                          • 1174
                          #7
                          Re: Aquatopia (Original Mix) WIP -- Feedback needed

                          Thanks guys

                          Finished:

                          http://www.tindeck.com/listen/qehv


                          Originally posted by KgZ
                          oh yeah girls love it when I stick my massive arm in their mouth

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                            • Sgtzombie.
                              FFR Player
                              • Jan 2009
                              • 134
                              #8
                              Re: Aquatopia (Original Mix) WIP -- Feedback needed

                              It's fantastic.
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                                • Cyanite
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                                  • Feb 2007
                                  • 1174
                                  #9
                                  Re: Aquatopia (Original Mix) WIP -- Feedback needed

                                  Thanks :]


                                  Originally posted by KgZ
                                  oh yeah girls love it when I stick my massive arm in their mouth

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                                    • Cyanite
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                                      • Feb 2007
                                      • 1174
                                      #10
                                      Re: Aquatopia (Original Mix) WIP -- Feedback needed

                                      Bumping


                                      Originally posted by KgZ
                                      oh yeah girls love it when I stick my massive arm in their mouth

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                                        • Adamaja456
                                          Absurd
                                          • Dec 2006
                                          • 6433
                                          #11
                                          Re: Aquatopia (Original Mix) WIP -- Feedback needed

                                          downloaded


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                                            • Cyanite
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                                              • Feb 2007
                                              • 1174
                                              #12
                                              Re: Aquatopia (Original Mix) WIP -- Feedback needed

                                              ..did you listen to it, by any chance?


                                              Originally posted by KgZ
                                              oh yeah girls love it when I stick my massive arm in their mouth

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                                                • Cyanite
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                                                  • Feb 2007
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                                                  #13
                                                  Re: Aquatopia (Original Mix) WIP -- Feedback needed

                                                  Alright, thanks

                                                  Just wondering.. I think you've heard other versions of this, and if you have, do you think the melody I used to end the song with would be a better alternative to this ending?


                                                  Originally posted by KgZ
                                                  oh yeah girls love it when I stick my massive arm in their mouth

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