Border of Life - =NeutraL=

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  • ddr_f4n
    FFR Player
    • Sep 2005
    • 3807
    #1

    Border of Life - =NeutraL=



    So it's my first attempt in a "serious" keyboard file since I usually make pad files. You can find it by clicking the banner above.

    Since most of you play KB files, I'd like you to rate and comment on the file. I'm thinking of adding serious keyboard files in my future single simfiles. Anything will be fine except "it sux lol" or "u cant step ****z" and stuff like that. Only constructive criticism.

    Anyways, enjoy!

    PS: gfx also made by me since I finally got photoshop yay!
    Out Now!


    Older Releases:
    Vocaloid: Project Pad Pack 3rd
    Gpop's Pack of Original Pad Simfiles
    東方幻想踊 (Touhou Gensouyou) ~ Illusionary Dance Fantasy & Vocaloid: Project Pad Pack 2nd
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    • Mr. Bob
      FFR Player
      • Jul 2008
      • 687
      #2
      Re: Border of Life - =NeutraL=

      gfx - ugly, the text is cut off while ingame
      song - terrible and uninteresting
      chart - wtf is this layering supposed to be it makes terrible patterns

      i only watched it once on 1.0 rate so i didn't look v.closely at it

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        • ddr_f4n
          FFR Player
          • Sep 2005
          • 3807
          #3
          Re: Border of Life - =NeutraL=

          Originally posted by Mr. Bob
          gfx - ugly, the text is cut off while ingame
          song - terrible and uninteresting
          chart - wtf is this layering supposed to be it makes terrible patterns

          i only watched it once on 1.0 rate so i didn't look v.closely at it
          About gfx, I didn't ask for it's review. If it's cut-off, it's either because of your theme, or your computer because it's fine for me.

          About song choice, everyone has their taste. Not asking about your opinion on song choice.

          About stepping, I have crappy layering? Okay. Just tell me what I can improve on, although playing it on 1x isn't recommended on this file.
          Out Now!


          Older Releases:
          Vocaloid: Project Pad Pack 3rd
          Gpop's Pack of Original Pad Simfiles
          東方幻想踊 (Touhou Gensouyou) ~ Illusionary Dance Fantasy & Vocaloid: Project Pad Pack 2nd

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            • Nullifidian
              ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
              FFR Simfile Author
              • Sep 2007
              • 1837
              #4
              Re: Border of Life - =NeutraL=

              GFX are part of the entire whole and should be judged with the file as well. GFX should fit the song and simfile.
              Song choice is really important for a good file. If you have a crap song, or a song that has been done thousand times, no one will want to play it.
              And he meant 1.0 rate, not 1x mod. Lower rates are used to check if everything is on sync, unless the file sucks so hard it's noticable on 1.0. Then it would be pointless to check on lower rates.

              How you replied is the standard answer of someone who can't take criticism (of any kind).
              I haven't played the file or listened to the song yet, but mr. bob probably knows what he's talking about.
              Last edited by Nullifidian; 02-4-2009, 03:07 AM.

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                • L0NEvvolf
                  FFR Veteran
                  • Nov 2006
                  • 2068
                  #5
                  Re: Border of Life - =NeutraL=

                  Ninja'd

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                    • moches
                      FFR Player
                      • Aug 2005
                      • 3996
                      #6
                      Re: Border of Life - =NeutraL=

                      Originally posted by ddr_f4n
                      About stepping, I have crappy layering? Okay. Just tell me what I can improve on, although playing it on 1x isn't recommended on this file.
                      I think this is a perfectly valid request _.Spitfire._. It's certainly better than what I shat out as my first file (Narcissus at Oasis, to be exact. Good times...good times.)

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                        • Patashu
                          FFR Simfile Author
                          FFR Simfile Author
                          • Apr 2006
                          • 8609
                          #7
                          Re: Border of Life - =NeutraL=

                          Originally posted by _.Spitfire._
                          How you replied is the standard answer of someone who can't take criticism (of any kind).
                          He asked for criticism. So, uh.
                          Patashu makes Chiptunes in Famitracker:
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                            • ddr_f4n
                              FFR Player
                              • Sep 2005
                              • 3807
                              #8
                              Re: Border of Life - =NeutraL=

                              You know, I am asking for criticism for the stepfile. I just want to know how can I improve. I don't bite really.

                              Although I do find the gfx fitting for me. Meh, alright, you guys thinks it crap. I understand. I just got Photoshop though, so gfx-making will improve (I hope).

                              And song choice, it sounds nice to me. Seems like everyone has their taste in music.
                              Out Now!


                              Older Releases:
                              Vocaloid: Project Pad Pack 3rd
                              Gpop's Pack of Original Pad Simfiles
                              東方幻想踊 (Touhou Gensouyou) ~ Illusionary Dance Fantasy & Vocaloid: Project Pad Pack 2nd

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                                • skyfox_
                                  FFR Player
                                  • Sep 2006
                                  • 354
                                  #9
                                  Re: Border of Life - =NeutraL=

                                  nothing impresses bob, so dont bother trying ;P jk, hes just not a touhou fan...

                                  the gfx was ok, but ive seen that yuyouko wallpaper more than enough times

                                  lol the jumpstream at the end killed it for me >.>

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                                    • XOX
                                      FFR Player
                                      • Aug 2006
                                      • 57
                                      #10
                                      Re: Border of Life - =NeutraL=

                                      wow please someone make a good chart of this song!!!

                                      I'm too lazy to make jumpstreams, because it's boring -.-

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                                        • ddr_f4n
                                          FFR Player
                                          • Sep 2005
                                          • 3807
                                          #11
                                          Re: Border of Life - =NeutraL=

                                          You know what I hate? People who just says it sucks, but don't explain how I can improve.

                                          Seriously, none of you actually told me HOW to improve. Only one person did, and he's from doujinstyle. There's a reason why I'm asking for contructive criticism, not complaints and whining.
                                          Out Now!


                                          Older Releases:
                                          Vocaloid: Project Pad Pack 3rd
                                          Gpop's Pack of Original Pad Simfiles
                                          東方幻想踊 (Touhou Gensouyou) ~ Illusionary Dance Fantasy & Vocaloid: Project Pad Pack 2nd

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                                            • skyfox_
                                              FFR Player
                                              • Sep 2006
                                              • 354
                                              #12
                                              Re: Border of Life - =NeutraL=

                                              srry but i kind of suck at this kind of thing, however i saw nothing wrong with the file, its pretty decent imo...

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                                                • XOX
                                                  FFR Player
                                                  • Aug 2006
                                                  • 57
                                                  #13
                                                  Re: Border of Life - =NeutraL=

                                                  okay I can say it like this: listen to the music

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                                                    • moches
                                                      FFR Player
                                                      • Aug 2005
                                                      • 3996
                                                      #14
                                                      Re: Border of Life - =NeutraL=

                                                      Okay...I'll give it a run.

                                                      EDIT: Quit out at about the one-minute mark. I thought the song really blew, but the problem with the steps is that they don't fit the song very well. Sometimes you used the same pattern even though the pitch changed, and sometimes you cut freezes short when they should have gone longer. I'm not sure how good your pitch relevancy was, but since you're pretty experienced with pad, I'll let it slide.
                                                      Last edited by moches; 02-7-2009, 05:39 AM.

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                                                        • Nullifidian
                                                          ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
                                                          FFR Simfile Author
                                                          • Sep 2007
                                                          • 1837
                                                          #15
                                                          Re: Border of Life - =NeutraL=

                                                          Originally posted by moches
                                                          I think this is a perfectly valid request _.Spitfire._. It's certainly better than what I shat out as my first file (Narcissus at Oasis, to be exact. Good times...good times.)
                                                          I never said anything bad about requesting more details about the criticism ;P

                                                          ps. I kinda liked the song =x

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