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  • Adamaja456
    Absurd
    • Dec 2006
    • 6433
    #1

    epic classical/orchestra? win or fail

    this was my first shot at making epic music. I think it turned out pretty good but i'd like to hear some feedback from music artists and non music artist on what i could improve on.

    I'm sure someone is going to notice i just used presets from garage band so you dont need to remind me. 80 BPM

    hope you guys enjoy
    <3

    http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/208485


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    • Cyanite
      SIT THE **** DOWN.
      FFR Simfile Author
      • Feb 2007
      • 1174
      #2
      Re: epic classical/orchestra? win or fail

      Needs percussion, IMO you're not going to get a whole lot of energy out of an orchestral piece without some intense crashes and snare/timpani hits and rolls.

      It also seemed kind of repetitive. It's cool, but it really sounds bland. The song has a lot more potential than what you did with it.


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        • championanwar
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          FFR Simfile Author
          FFR Music Producer
          • Jun 2004
          • 2588
          #3
          Re: epic classical/orchestra? win or fail

          ****in awesome, I think it was one of the best I've heard on new grounds. May I ask what software you used?

          Could use a few percussion and maybe some new instruments though, thats it really. Not boring at all

          Edit: maybe could have had a finale XD

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            • Adamaja456
              Absurd
              • Dec 2006
              • 6433
              #4
              Re: epic classical/orchestra? win or fail

              yea, there are parts where it seems empty but i wasn't sure how to use the percussion to make it sound better so i didn't use any at all.

              maybe if i get more feedback, i will go back and make a v2

              edit: Garage band using all presets from the Symphony Orchestra Jam Pack
              Last edited by Adamaja456; 01-31-2009, 09:00 AM.


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                • SK_BleedingFire
                  FFR Player
                  • Jan 2007
                  • 46
                  #5
                  Re: epic classical/orchestra? win or fail

                  Wasn't a big fan.
                  If I had to play this over and over again as a violinist, I'd get easily bored and disinterested.
                  Make a v2 with less repitition [cut some measures?] and DEFF add more percussion. Timpani will give it more life.

                  Pelvic-thrusting strangers since 2006.

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                    • samurai7694
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                      FFR Simfile Author
                      • Aug 2008
                      • 4640
                      #6
                      Re: epic classical/orchestra? win or fail

                      I like the quality of the sound and the song was pretty good. What program did you use? Maybe we should team up and make Venetian-Snare-like music. I would provide the percussion with insane drum beats

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                        • Adamaja456
                          Absurd
                          • Dec 2006
                          • 6433
                          #7
                          Re: epic classical/orchestra? win or fail

                          thanks for the honest feedback guys. i will definitely go back and work on revising this song with the suggestions you all gave me.

                          <3


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                            • dragon890x
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                              • Jun 2005
                              • 565
                              #8
                              Re: epic classical/orchestra? win or fail

                              It reminded me of the music you hear in a game when you are walking down a winding road waiting for something to happen. o-O;; If that helps.

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