Finished it up this morning.
C&C greatly appreciated.
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Finished it up this morning.
C&C greatly appreciated.Last edited by Cyanite; 01-13-2009, 11:40 AM.
Originally posted by KgZ -
Re: Tears of the Moon
What the hell does it take to get any attention here?
Seriously, I have to bump virtually all of my threads just to squeeze one or two comments out of you guys. I don't mean to complain, but come on already.
Originally posted by KgZ -
Re: Tears of the Moon
hmm very nice. Has some good energy. Kinda took a while for any sort of melody to show up.. but I guess thats how the genre is :P. hmm... im not sure what it is.. but the pianoey lead feels somewhat dissonant from the rest.. something about the piano and bass clashing somewhat. hmm.. now the counter melody came in... this sounds really clashing. Now.. I dont have perfect pitch, so I can only assume everything is in the right key... but things feel very very clashy.
I think this has the potential to be a REALLY good track. But alot of the sounds clash from what I can tell. Keep up the good work bro.Comment
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Re: Tears of the Moon
Wow, thanks man.
Does anyone else hear the clashing SBX does? I'm not hearing it.
Originally posted by KgZComment
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Re: Tears of the Moon
Listening...
Very nice. As KgZ said, one of the best things to be brought here and not need much.
I find the cymbals between beats a little little overwhelming. It drowns out all the rest of that beautiful sound that lies underneath. Perhaps try a different quality of symbal or tone it down?
Now I'm not as sure on this one, but I would suggest experimenting with different sounds for the base line. I don't really like the "grittiness" of it. Maybe because I want to hear the song with a more smooth texture, seeing how it is trance.
But it's all in key, if my ears serve me correctly.Last edited by Raveren; 01-14-2009, 08:03 PM.“A painter paints his pictures on canvas. But musicians paint their pictures on silence. We provide the music, and you provide the silence.” -Leopold StokowskiComment
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hmm...well I guess I could describe it as dissonant rather than clashy.. Not sure why im hearing it and othe people arent... :SComment
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Re: Tears of the Moon
I actually like basses like the ones I used, personally.. I don't know what kind of trance you're used to listening to, but Divine by Selu Vibra has one of the best basslines in trance I've ever heard, and this one is kind of similar in its style.
As far as the cymbals, I was just following a basic trance beat. They sound fine on my headphones, but maybe they're not picking up a higher frequency.. I'll look into it.
Thanks.
Originally posted by KgZComment
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