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  • Cyanite
    SIT THE **** DOWN.
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Feb 2007
    • 1174
    #1

    Seriously need feedback on this

    http://www.tindeck.com/audio/fileshack/s/shen-New%20Project.mp3


    EDIT: New version, with a quieter bass:

    http://www.tindeck.com/audio/fileshack/f/fbsb-New%20Project.mp3


    This isn't finished yet, but I really need some feedback on how it's turning out so far.

    Around the time I finished my last album, I realized that my music has become something I never wanted it to be -- formulaic and predictable. My music has gotten to the point where I was able to make a song, start to finish, in less than two or three hours, using half-assed melodies and synths.

    So, I made this track, which so far I've put about 18 hours of work into in the last two weeks. It's not even close to finished, I'm predicting the final version will be something around 12 minutes long, with more variation in the mastering, percussion and form.

    Disregarding the intro (I intend on elaborating on it later on), is there anything I should change so far? I want to make this track the best it can possibly be.
    Last edited by Cyanite; 01-10-2009, 09:04 AM.


    Originally posted by KgZ
    oh yeah girls love it when I stick my massive arm in their mouth
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    • dood gone krazee
      RATOOOOOOOOO
      FFR Simfile Author
      • May 2007
      • 1939
      #2
      Re: Seriously need feedback on this

      In my opinion it is really good. Seemed just a bit predictable, but usually most house/rave/techno songs do. It was well mixed to start, I loved the heavy bass. Can't wait to hear the finished product. I kind of had the same opinion on your songs before, they didn't quite seem... different. They were all kinda generic. This is much better though. The only thing is that the melody sounded vaguely like Hyper Pressure.
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        • Cyanite
          SIT THE **** DOWN.
          FFR Simfile Author
          • Feb 2007
          • 1174
          #3
          Re: Seriously need feedback on this

          Seriously? Hyper Pressure? I haven't listened to that song in months.

          So does the bass sound alright throughout? I'm a bit concerned that it might be too loud.


          Originally posted by KgZ
          oh yeah girls love it when I stick my massive arm in their mouth

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            • Atharus
              FFR Player
              • Jan 2008
              • 18
              #4
              Re: Seriously need feedback on this

              Well, I'm liking it so far!

              While I doubt my opinion counts for much, I do think the bass is a bit too much; it's a little difficult to hear the melody over it for most of the song.

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                • Cyanite
                  SIT THE **** DOWN.
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  • Feb 2007
                  • 1174
                  #5
                  Re: Seriously need feedback on this

                  Alright, I'm going to see what I can do about the bass. And of course your opinion counts!

                  Thanks.


                  Originally posted by KgZ
                  oh yeah girls love it when I stick my massive arm in their mouth

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