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  • Renevatia
    FFR Veteran
    • Feb 2006
    • 555

    #1

    Ocean test



    trying this kinda stuff for the first time

    need much crits (that doesnt involve 'lens flare sux')
    lens flare is just there for kicks

    the ocean..just incase you can't tell, and didn't read the title, what to do to add more depth (not that it has any as of now)


    -back to photoshop-


    thx for the imput, but still a long~ way to go =.=' ..
    dump me more crits

    back to photoshop again-
    process of learning is fun ;3
    Last edited by Renevatia; 01-6-2009, 03:26 AM.
    Reminder for self to make new sig.
  • Superfreak04
    D7 Elite Keymasher
    • Jan 2007
    • 2407

    #2
    Re: Ocean test

    I really like it, it's beautiful.

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    • KotHN
      FFR's Resident President
      • Apr 2007
      • 435

      #3
      Re: Ocean test

      wow, that looks fantastic!:O
      This makes me feel really happy:P

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      • who_cares973
        FFR Player
        • Aug 2006
        • 15407

        #4
        Re: Ocean test

        looks nothing like an ocean =/ it looks like just some holes in ice
        try making the waves look more..well, like waves
        the clouds and sun look fine good job on that

        can't wait to see the end result ^-^

        cant really give you advice since i've never drawn water -_- just google some open ocean pictures for reference i guess

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        • sarahxjane
          FFR Veteran
          • Aug 2005
          • 2109

          #5
          Re: Ocean test

          I wish the sun wasn't smack dab in the middle, but meh.

          I love your work.
          Originally posted by Tasselfoot
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          • Renevatia
            FFR Veteran
            • Feb 2006
            • 555

            #6
            Re: Ocean test

            Originally posted by who_cares973
            looks nothing like an ocean =/ it looks like just some holes in ice
            try making the waves look more..well, like waves
            the clouds and sun look fine good job on that

            can't wait to see the end result ^-^

            cant really give you advice since i've never drawn water -_- just google some open ocean pictures for reference i guess
            lol..more like waves..ya..i'd love to try that

            or more like..know how to try that xDDD

            i've checked google, there is none that is close to what i was looking for
            clear light blue/green/turquoise + calm waves..
            Last edited by Renevatia; 12-30-2008, 01:24 AM.
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            • who_cares973
              FFR Player
              • Aug 2006
              • 15407

              #7
              Re: Ocean test

              DeviantArt is the world's largest online social community for artists and art enthusiasts, allowing people to connect through the creation and sharing of art.


              try using those brushes maybe they'll help you



              there is another wave reference you could use

              i couldnt find a pciture with the colors you wanted though sorry =/

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              • Renevatia
                FFR Veteran
                • Feb 2006
                • 555

                #8
                Re: Ocean test

                Originally posted by who_cares973
                http://scully7491.deviantart.com/art...ushes-28700982

                try using those brushes maybe they'll help you



                there is another wave reference you could use

                i couldnt find a pciture with the colors you wanted though sorry =/
                i will NEVER use a preset brush in the learning stage..it defeats the purpose of learning. lol
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                • darkshark
                  Nothing.
                  • Nov 2004
                  • 4189

                  #9
                  Re: Ocean test

                  Hmmmmm, I like you Renevatia. You make art.

                  For more depth, since the angle of the view seems to be radial, make a falloff radial shadow/reflection on the water, because there isn't a reflection at all at this point, highlight point will be directly below the sunlight, have it fade out from there, to a deeper hue.

                  ps your clouds rock.

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                  • Renevatia
                    FFR Veteran
                    • Feb 2006
                    • 555

                    #10
                    Re: Ocean test

                    edited v2 .need moar
                    btw clouds kinda sux atm
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                    • sarahxjane
                      FFR Veteran
                      • Aug 2005
                      • 2109

                      #11
                      Re: Ocean test

                      The color in version 2 is much better.
                      Originally posted by Tasselfoot
                      whatever you do... don't **** a walros.
                      Originally posted by funmonkey54
                      *knock knock*
                      *opens door*
                      Hello sir, I am a representative from eBay.
                      Um, ok. May I help you?
                      Yes, I am going to need some more information. What is your social security, work hours, sperm count, sexual orientation, and hours of absence from your home?

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                      • darkshark
                        Nothing.
                        • Nov 2004
                        • 4189

                        #12
                        Re: Ocean test

                        Look at a real sun scene, add some white highlights to caustic points on the water. Might be hard to pull off but, then again it's just a test, see what you can work up!

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                        • Renevatia
                          FFR Veteran
                          • Feb 2006
                          • 555

                          #13
                          Re: Ocean test

                          Originally posted by darkshark
                          Look at a real sun scene, add some white highlights to caustic points on the water. Might be hard to pull off but, then again it's just a test, see what you can work up!
                          ya i checked some of those,

                          really its not hard to mimic completely the ocean wave effect..from photos
                          but all the sources had really really boring looking water

                          i was drawing for a clear feeling ..like those..paradise places with clear turquoise water that shines the crap out of your face..and feels really refreshing to look at.

                          basically..I don't like real life looking stuff, want to surpass it, making things better than it can look, thats why people draw fantasy right?
                          so..sources can only take me so far :/
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                          • Renevatia
                            FFR Veteran
                            • Feb 2006
                            • 555

                            #14
                            Re: Ocean test

                            updated ..again..with off topic stuff..but meh,
                            some ppl can probably guess where this is heading ;3


                            -experimenting new stuff-
                            Reminder for self to make new sig.

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                            • who_cares973
                              FFR Player
                              • Aug 2006
                              • 15407

                              #15
                              Re: Ocean test

                              second one looks alot better

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