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  • BeYonD_GlOrY
    FFR Player
    • Jan 2008
    • 110
    #1

    started a new song

    first time ever trying to make music like this... so idk... pointers, tips?
    tell me if its worth continuing.
    note: don't think you can hear the bass if you don't have bass on your speakers :P

    http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/196643
    Last edited by BeYonD_GlOrY; 12-27-2008, 06:57 PM.
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    • iPatcH
      Swamp Lemons Rule
      FFR Simfile Author
      FFR Music Producer
      • Dec 2004
      • 3370
      #2
      Re: started a new song

      I can't hear the bass because there is none.

      There's not much to it... a pad, a gated synth and some percussion. The melody is a tad dissonant but I think you could honestly try to work this into something more elaborate with some more aggressive percussion and, yes, a bassline.

      Better than a lot of peoples' first tries so keep at it.
      put on a donk on it

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        • tha Guardians
          MCDC 2011
          • Nov 2006
          • 1680
          #3
          Re: started a new song

          Needs a melody and less loop.

          It's worth continuing if its worth working hard on. (lol I said hard on)
          I like it so far, though :3

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            • BeYonD_GlOrY
              FFR Player
              • Jan 2008
              • 110
              #4
              Re: started a new song

              Originally posted by iPatcH
              I can't hear the bass because there is none.

              There's not much to it... a pad, a gated synth and some percussion. The melody is a tad dissonant but I think you could honestly try to work this into something more elaborate with some more aggressive percussion and, yes, a bassline.

              Better than a lot of peoples' first tries so keep at it.
              first off thanks for the feed back, second oops this is a tad eirlier version that it is right now i have added some bass and a little more all over but really i have no real idea what im doing... lol

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                • Shadowcliff
                  FFR Veteran
                  • Jan 2008
                  • 695
                  #5
                  Re: started a new song

                  It sounds like it has potential. I would add more exciting percussion, a more intricate melody, and a bassline. Then work from there.

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                    • BeYonD_GlOrY
                      FFR Player
                      • Jan 2008
                      • 110
                      #6
                      Re: started a new song

                      ok ill try to incorperate that

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                        • GG_Guru
                          Let em' do what they want
                          • Mar 2006
                          • 3219
                          #7
                          Re: started a new song

                          The beginning it sounds like it came from the Scarface movie.

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                            • BeYonD_GlOrY
                              FFR Player
                              • Jan 2008
                              • 110
                              #8
                              Re: started a new song

                              really? ive never seen it

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                                • megamon88
                                  FFR Simfile Author
                                  FFR Simfile Author
                                  FFR Music Producer
                                  • Feb 2006
                                  • 2567
                                  #9
                                  Re: started a new song

                                  Lol reminded me a bit of Justin Timberlake's "My Love".
                                  Add a melody, some bass, and basically do what KgZ said to do.

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                                    • BeYonD_GlOrY
                                      FFR Player
                                      • Jan 2008
                                      • 110
                                      #10
                                      Re: started a new song

                                      lol yeah i see what you mean\-

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