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  • BeYonD_GlOrY
    FFR Player
    • Jan 2008
    • 110

    #1

    started a new song

    first time ever trying to make music like this... so idk... pointers, tips?
    tell me if its worth continuing.
    note: don't think you can hear the bass if you don't have bass on your speakers :P

    http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/196643
    Last edited by BeYonD_GlOrY; 12-27-2008, 06:57 PM.
  • iPatcH
    Swamp Lemons Rule
    FFR Simfile Author
    FFR Music Producer
    • Dec 2004
    • 3370

    #2
    Re: started a new song

    I can't hear the bass because there is none.

    There's not much to it... a pad, a gated synth and some percussion. The melody is a tad dissonant but I think you could honestly try to work this into something more elaborate with some more aggressive percussion and, yes, a bassline.

    Better than a lot of peoples' first tries so keep at it.
    put on a donk on it

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    • tha Guardians
      MCDC 2011
      • Nov 2006
      • 1680

      #3
      Re: started a new song

      Needs a melody and less loop.

      It's worth continuing if its worth working hard on. (lol I said hard on)
      I like it so far, though :3

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      • BeYonD_GlOrY
        FFR Player
        • Jan 2008
        • 110

        #4
        Re: started a new song

        Originally posted by iPatcH
        I can't hear the bass because there is none.

        There's not much to it... a pad, a gated synth and some percussion. The melody is a tad dissonant but I think you could honestly try to work this into something more elaborate with some more aggressive percussion and, yes, a bassline.

        Better than a lot of peoples' first tries so keep at it.
        first off thanks for the feed back, second oops this is a tad eirlier version that it is right now i have added some bass and a little more all over but really i have no real idea what im doing... lol

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        • Shadowcliff
          FFR Veteran
          • Jan 2008
          • 695

          #5
          Re: started a new song

          It sounds like it has potential. I would add more exciting percussion, a more intricate melody, and a bassline. Then work from there.

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          • BeYonD_GlOrY
            FFR Player
            • Jan 2008
            • 110

            #6
            Re: started a new song

            ok ill try to incorperate that

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            • GG_Guru
              Let em' do what they want
              • Mar 2006
              • 3219

              #7
              Re: started a new song

              The beginning it sounds like it came from the Scarface movie.

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              • BeYonD_GlOrY
                FFR Player
                • Jan 2008
                • 110

                #8
                Re: started a new song

                really? ive never seen it

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                • megamon88
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  FFR Music Producer
                  • Feb 2006
                  • 2567

                  #9
                  Re: started a new song

                  Lol reminded me a bit of Justin Timberlake's "My Love".
                  Add a melody, some bass, and basically do what KgZ said to do.

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                  • BeYonD_GlOrY
                    FFR Player
                    • Jan 2008
                    • 110

                    #10
                    Re: started a new song

                    lol yeah i see what you mean\-

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