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  • robertsona
    missa in h-moll
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Dec 2006
    • 3997
    #1

    My awful song

    http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/186556

    I don't even want to link to the other one because it's so bad.


    Suggestions?

    This was made after like tooling around in FL Studio for a really short time.
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    • knuckles2224
      Angel Island ♥
      • Jun 2007
      • 1530
      #2
      Re: My awful song

      It's so bad I didn't bother listening to it


      Originally posted by arrekusuof93
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        • Mans0n
          Sun and Stars
          FFR Music Producer
          • Sep 2006
          • 2907
          #3
          Re: My awful song

          very annoying in my opinion, i voted 5 though, because i hate fags that 0 bomb your stuff.
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            • dandandamdandan1111
              the baker man
              • Jun 2007
              • 2176
              #4
              Re: My awful song

              tone down the volume a bit

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                • Atharus
                  FFR Player
                  • Jan 2008
                  • 18
                  #5
                  Re: My awful song

                  I don't mind the song. I doubt it's any consolation, but it's a lot better than any of my early attempts in FL Studio.

                  In my opinion you need to work on the volumes and mixing a bit more.

                  Also, look around on kvraudio.com for some free instruments and plugins.
                  Last edited by Atharus; 12-11-2008, 02:44 AM.

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                    • iPatcH
                      Swamp Lemons Rule
                      FFR Simfile Author
                      FFR Music Producer
                      • Dec 2004
                      • 3370
                      #6
                      Re: My awful song

                      whoa you should probably turn down all the volume levels

                      slayer is seriously the worst synth ever and I can't understand why anyone uses it

                      the harmonics aren't too bad

                      your percussion is flat and weak. it's not an amen break unless you sample amen brother.
                      put on a donk on it

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                        • John McPain
                          FFR Player
                          • Nov 2008
                          • 34
                          #7
                          Re: My awful song

                          I like it, but I also like Ramstine so in alot of peoples' opinion I have no taste in music.
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                            • infinity.
                              FFR Veteran
                              • Sep 2007
                              • 1701
                              #8
                              Re: My awful song

                              i actually like this,
                              when the 8bit and the slayer mesh sounds nice, atleast to me.

                              but yeah, try eqing stuff, its really cluttered and messy


                              but you're not bad at all
                              signatures are for nerds

                              nerds

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                                • championanwar
                                  Ask Nuro! x3
                                  FFR Simfile Author
                                  FFR Music Producer
                                  • Jun 2004
                                  • 2588
                                  #9
                                  Re: My awful song

                                  I liked this, it has alot of potential. I can imagine a band playing this, has a nice feel to it. The drums could be improved a bit. The levels were a bit all over the place, but its a great start. Nice job.

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                                    • DarkbearX
                                      Shimose
                                      FFR Simfile Author
                                      FFR Music Producer
                                      • Feb 2006
                                      • 1995
                                      #10
                                      Re: My awful song

                                      Originally posted by iPatcH
                                      slayer is seriously the worst synth ever and I can't understand why anyone uses it
                                      Pretty much. Although if you're patient enough, you can make it work.

                                      Also, it's not a bad track robert rofl. Reviewed on NG.
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