1st song, need criticism

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  • MaxGhost
    FFR Veteran
    • Feb 2008
    • 2141

    #1

    1st song, need criticism

    Myeah. I'm in my school's radio team, and we have some pretty sweet audio programs... eJay to be specific, and I made a pretty sweet techno song with it during my lunch... took 50ish minutes to make. I'll upload the song and post a link for you guys. I'd like some criticism on it , and feel free to be harsh, I can take it. Also, I don't have a name for the song, but it's the first mix I made so I just named the file "1stmix". I'd also take some name suggestions!

    I actually really like this thing, so I feel like stepping it... I'm a failiure of a stepper, so I'd also need some help in that department... If anyone wants to step it, go for it! (bring it by me first if your releasing it)

    So here's the link : http://www.kinvault.net/maxghost/Ghost%20Simian.zip

    ---> Copy pasted from the Stepmania and ai. forum, wasn't getting feedback, and friend suggest to post it here...

    Edit: I edited the file to a zip with graphics which would be used in the making of a stepfile... Also, I officially gave it a name. I present to you, "Ghost Simian", and I present myself as "Ghost". Lol.
    Last edited by MaxGhost; 12-8-2008, 02:16 PM.
  • championanwar
    Ask Nuro! x3
    FFR Simfile Author
    FFR Music Producer
    • Jun 2004
    • 2588

    #2
    Re: 1st song, need criticism

    Sounded good, don't really know what to say though. It's pretty catchy.
    Last edited by championanwar; 12-7-2008, 11:53 PM.

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    • -KIDTHONG-
      FFR Veteran
      • Sep 2007
      • 578

      #3
      Re: 1st song, need criticism

      can i step it?
      Please keep your sig to the 250 x 600 size outlined in the site rules. BAM!

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      • MaxGhost
        FFR Veteran
        • Feb 2008
        • 2141

        #4
        Re: 1st song, need criticism

        Originally posted by -KIDTHONG-
        can i step it?
        Please! I'd really like to see it stepped...

        But fyi, I don't like the name I gave it... I need another name for it, but I'm so not creative...


        Edit: I'm gonna make some graphics for it pretty soon, so I'll send em to you. By the way, I think I found a suitable name for it: Ghost Simian... Thoughts?

        Edit2: Done the graphics... I'll post the new link in the first post, replacing the original. KIDTHONG, if you're stepping it, please make sure you use the name "Ghost Simian" and artist as "Ghost". Thanks!
        Last edited by MaxGhost; 12-8-2008, 02:13 PM.

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        • GodfatherArtist
          FFR Player
          • Nov 2008
          • 9

          #5
          Re: 1st song, need criticism

          lol I'm sorry, but did your other thread say 50 minutes long? That would be crazy to step and a crazy stamina file to play. xP

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          • MaxGhost
            FFR Veteran
            • Feb 2008
            • 2141

            #6
            Re: 1st song, need criticism

            It took 50 minutes TO MAKE. It's 1 minute and 47~ seconds...

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            • MaxGhost
              FFR Veteran
              • Feb 2008
              • 2141

              #7
              Re: 1st song, need criticism

              Bump? and KIDTHONG, are you progressing on the stepfile?

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              • Tr44nc33
                FFR Player
                • Aug 2008
                • 152

                #8
                Re: 1st song, need criticism

                And now the simfile discussion should be in Stepmania & ai.
                So are you working on another song?

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                • MaxGhost
                  FFR Veteran
                  • Feb 2008
                  • 2141

                  #9
                  Re: 1st song, need criticism

                  Rofl. I know, but 1 thread is better than 2... -.-

                  Yeah I got 2 other songs done, but I don't really deem them as good as the first... I'll rework em, then release them...


                  Edit: I opened an artist account on soundclick.com -> http://www.soundclick.com/GhostCanada
                  Last edited by MaxGhost; 12-13-2008, 10:16 PM.

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                  • MaxGhost
                    FFR Veteran
                    • Feb 2008
                    • 2141

                    #10
                    Re: 1st song, need criticism

                    Massive old crazy bump, but I just found this again, brought back old memories of the shitty shit I randomly made cause I was bored T_T

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