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  • Atharus
    FFR Player
    • Jan 2008
    • 18

    #1

    Twilight Phase

    Artist: Defade
    Title: Twilight Phase
    Length: 4:13
    Genre: Electronica, idk...

    - http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7017991

    I'm posting this here in the hopes that somebody else in the world will listen to my music. I'm new to this, and I can't improve if I have no idea what to improve upon.
    Constructive critique is most welcome, and I thank all those who take the time to listen to it, even if you dislike it.
  • sarahxjane
    FFR Veteran
    • Aug 2005
    • 2109

    #2
    Re: Twilight Phase

    Is this your first song?

    Either way, it's not bad.
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    • sleeplessdragn
      ~Bang that beat Harder~
      FFR Simfile Author
      FFR Music Producer
      • Jan 2004
      • 2321

      #3
      Re: Twilight Phase

      I would say...

      just keep making more music! ^_^

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      • Atharus
        FFR Player
        • Jan 2008
        • 18

        #4
        Re: Twilight Phase

        Originally posted by sarahxjane
        Is this your first song?

        Either way, it's not bad.
        Thank you. I'd consider it my first song in that it's the first thing I've made that I consider at least decent enough to let others listen to it. I'm still learning a lot about mixing as you can tell, it's kind of messed up with this song.

        I'm going to complete a few more songs I have as I love them and love composing, it just helps to know if anyone else actually likes them also. I guess it's like that for all musicians ^_^;

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        • EAGAMES
          Y0FACE!
          • Dec 2006
          • 4931

          #5
          Re: Twilight Phase

          This song sounds like a remix of another song, but this is 100x better. Go finish your other works in progress!
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          • Atharus
            FFR Player
            • Jan 2008
            • 18

            #6
            Re: Twilight Phase

            New song.

            Artist: Defade
            Title: Forever Is Too Short (Cliché, I know)
            Length: 5:50
            Genre: I'd call it trance of some sort... (I have trouble classifying my own music...)

            - http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7169999

            I wasn't expecting it to end up so long, but it just kinda... happened.

            Please bare with the sup-par mastering, I'm new to this and I'd like to think I'm improving at least. I also plan to re-master all of my music as I get more experience and better equipment.

            Anyway, I appreciate any and all who take the time to listen, regardless of whether you like it or not.
            Last edited by Atharus; 12-23-2008, 11:44 PM.

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