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  • Renevatia
    FFR Veteran
    • Feb 2006
    • 555
    #1

    Angel? lol

    yes angel....again

    WIP

    any anatomical error before i move on? ..feels like there are , but can't really tell where =.='


    yes the weird coloring on the skirt was kept intentionally, cause i thought i looks nice xDD like those random water mark ppl do..
    Last edited by Renevatia; 10-27-2008, 06:15 AM. Reason: MOAR
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    • dag12
      FFR Simfile Author
      FFR Simfile Author
      • Dec 2004
      • 468
      #2
      Re: Angel? lol

      neck feels a tad bit too long; but I'm not one to judge, having no experience.
      Just throwing it out there, coming from a layman's perspective.

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        • Renevatia
          FFR Veteran
          • Feb 2006
          • 555
          #3
          Re: Angel? lol

          Originally posted by dag12
          neck feels a tad bit too long; but I'm not one to judge, having no experience.
          Just throwing it out there, coming from a layman's perspective.
          lol whoa..ur right o.O by a bit haha..i guess i got caught up on tilting the head up...
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            • Xx{Midnight}xX
              FFR Player
              • Aug 2007
              • 8548
              #4
              Re: Angel? lol

              I'm not an artist so from an inexperienced persons view: The neck seems fine to me. The left hand on the two fingers next to each other it's hard to tell that it's two fingers to me. Also the skirt might need to be a wee bit longer cause with the line you drew it looks like she has shorter legs than I think you intended. (If it's supposed to look that way then big opps on my part.)

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                • Renevatia
                  FFR Veteran
                  • Feb 2006
                  • 555
                  #5
                  Re: Angel? lol

                  Originally posted by Xx{Midnight}xX
                  I'm not an artist so from an inexperienced persons view: The neck seems fine to me. The left hand on the two fingers next to each other it's hard to tell that it's two fingers to me. Also the skirt might need to be a wee bit longer cause with the line you drew it looks like she has shorter legs than I think you intended. (If it's supposed to look that way then big opps on my part.)
                  ya..should make the legs longer / bigger. ;D ..fingers..its still on rough..so meh..will probably be fixed later..if i work on i tthat is
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                    • who_cares973
                      FFR Player
                      • Aug 2006
                      • 15407
                      #6
                      Re: Angel? lol

                      the length from the neck to the shoulder on the right arm is shorter than on the left arm

                      thats the first thing i saw xD

                      also are the legs crossed because if the lines wouldve kept going they would have crossed sooner than they should

                      do i see an adams apple O.o?

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                        • Renevatia
                          FFR Veteran
                          • Feb 2006
                          • 555
                          #7
                          Re: Angel? lol

                          Originally posted by who_cares973
                          the length from the neck to the shoulder on the right arm is shorter than on the left arm

                          thats the first thing i saw xD

                          also are the legs crossed because if the lines wouldve kept going they would have crossed sooner than they should

                          do i see an adams apple O.o?
                          yes..but for reference shading..it wont be as apparent hahaha
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                            • who_cares973
                              FFR Player
                              • Aug 2006
                              • 15407
                              #8
                              Re: Angel? lol

                              you and your reference shading xD

                              very awesome

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                                • Renevatia
                                  FFR Veteran
                                  • Feb 2006
                                  • 555
                                  #9
                                  Re: Angel? lol

                                  Originally posted by who_cares973
                                  you and your reference shading xD

                                  very awesome
                                  it doesnt really help the shading process..but just picks out a good light source XD haha


                                  btw: finished >.>
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                                    • sarahxjane
                                      FFR Veteran
                                      • Aug 2005
                                      • 2109
                                      #10
                                      Re: Angel? lol

                                      I really like your drawing/coloring style.

                                      As I am unable to find anything I would change in the finished version -- beautiful job m'dear.

                                      P.S. She kind of looks like Orihime.
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                                        • Mahjix
                                          FFR Veteran
                                          • May 2006
                                          • 182
                                          #11
                                          Re: Angel? lol

                                          From the direction in which the light is coming from, I would suggest there be some indication of shadow coming from her nose, otherwise it looks really flat. Speaking of, that space between her nose and mouth looks a bit much.
                                          I think the foreshortening of the hands/arm could use a bit more work but it works. Coloring is great. Lovely shading.
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                                            • who_cares973
                                              FFR Player
                                              • Aug 2006
                                              • 15407
                                              #12
                                              Re: Angel? lol

                                              this bugs me alot =/
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                                                • Renevatia
                                                  FFR Veteran
                                                  • Feb 2006
                                                  • 555
                                                  #13
                                                  Re: Angel? lol

                                                  Originally posted by who_cares973
                                                  this bugs me alot =/
                                                  hmm i think it is fixed in the color version? although i didnt really check with a ruler..but it looks..same..or. very close atleast..
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                                                    • who_cares973
                                                      FFR Player
                                                      • Aug 2006
                                                      • 15407
                                                      #14
                                                      Re: Angel? lol

                                                      its the same in the coloured version

                                                      it could just be me but i see a huge difference >.>

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                                                        • phe0nixblade
                                                          Praise the sun mofo
                                                          • Sep 2005
                                                          • 4281
                                                          #15
                                                          Re: Angel? lol

                                                          god damn you're good
                                                          even more reason to say hi to you when i see you randomly on the site

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