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  • Renevatia
    FFR Veteran
    • Feb 2006
    • 555

    #1

    Angel? lol

    yes angel....again

    WIP

    any anatomical error before i move on? ..feels like there are , but can't really tell where =.='


    yes the weird coloring on the skirt was kept intentionally, cause i thought i looks nice xDD like those random water mark ppl do..
    Last edited by Renevatia; 10-27-2008, 06:15 AM. Reason: MOAR
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  • dag12
    FFR Simfile Author
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Dec 2004
    • 468

    #2
    Re: Angel? lol

    neck feels a tad bit too long; but I'm not one to judge, having no experience.
    Just throwing it out there, coming from a layman's perspective.

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    • Renevatia
      FFR Veteran
      • Feb 2006
      • 555

      #3
      Re: Angel? lol

      Originally posted by dag12
      neck feels a tad bit too long; but I'm not one to judge, having no experience.
      Just throwing it out there, coming from a layman's perspective.
      lol whoa..ur right o.O by a bit haha..i guess i got caught up on tilting the head up...
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      • Xx{Midnight}xX
        FFR Player
        • Aug 2007
        • 8548

        #4
        Re: Angel? lol

        I'm not an artist so from an inexperienced persons view: The neck seems fine to me. The left hand on the two fingers next to each other it's hard to tell that it's two fingers to me. Also the skirt might need to be a wee bit longer cause with the line you drew it looks like she has shorter legs than I think you intended. (If it's supposed to look that way then big opps on my part.)

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        • Renevatia
          FFR Veteran
          • Feb 2006
          • 555

          #5
          Re: Angel? lol

          Originally posted by Xx{Midnight}xX
          I'm not an artist so from an inexperienced persons view: The neck seems fine to me. The left hand on the two fingers next to each other it's hard to tell that it's two fingers to me. Also the skirt might need to be a wee bit longer cause with the line you drew it looks like she has shorter legs than I think you intended. (If it's supposed to look that way then big opps on my part.)
          ya..should make the legs longer / bigger. ;D ..fingers..its still on rough..so meh..will probably be fixed later..if i work on i tthat is
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          • who_cares973
            FFR Player
            • Aug 2006
            • 15407

            #6
            Re: Angel? lol

            the length from the neck to the shoulder on the right arm is shorter than on the left arm

            thats the first thing i saw xD

            also are the legs crossed because if the lines wouldve kept going they would have crossed sooner than they should

            do i see an adams apple O.o?

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            • Renevatia
              FFR Veteran
              • Feb 2006
              • 555

              #7
              Re: Angel? lol

              Originally posted by who_cares973
              the length from the neck to the shoulder on the right arm is shorter than on the left arm

              thats the first thing i saw xD

              also are the legs crossed because if the lines wouldve kept going they would have crossed sooner than they should

              do i see an adams apple O.o?
              yes..but for reference shading..it wont be as apparent hahaha
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              • who_cares973
                FFR Player
                • Aug 2006
                • 15407

                #8
                Re: Angel? lol

                you and your reference shading xD

                very awesome

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                • Renevatia
                  FFR Veteran
                  • Feb 2006
                  • 555

                  #9
                  Re: Angel? lol

                  Originally posted by who_cares973
                  you and your reference shading xD

                  very awesome
                  it doesnt really help the shading process..but just picks out a good light source XD haha


                  btw: finished >.>
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                  • sarahxjane
                    FFR Veteran
                    • Aug 2005
                    • 2109

                    #10
                    Re: Angel? lol

                    I really like your drawing/coloring style.

                    As I am unable to find anything I would change in the finished version -- beautiful job m'dear.

                    P.S. She kind of looks like Orihime.
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                    • Mahjix
                      FFR Veteran
                      • May 2006
                      • 182

                      #11
                      Re: Angel? lol

                      From the direction in which the light is coming from, I would suggest there be some indication of shadow coming from her nose, otherwise it looks really flat. Speaking of, that space between her nose and mouth looks a bit much.
                      I think the foreshortening of the hands/arm could use a bit more work but it works. Coloring is great. Lovely shading.
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                      • who_cares973
                        FFR Player
                        • Aug 2006
                        • 15407

                        #12
                        Re: Angel? lol

                        this bugs me alot =/
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                        • Renevatia
                          FFR Veteran
                          • Feb 2006
                          • 555

                          #13
                          Re: Angel? lol

                          Originally posted by who_cares973
                          this bugs me alot =/
                          hmm i think it is fixed in the color version? although i didnt really check with a ruler..but it looks..same..or. very close atleast..
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                          • who_cares973
                            FFR Player
                            • Aug 2006
                            • 15407

                            #14
                            Re: Angel? lol

                            its the same in the coloured version

                            it could just be me but i see a huge difference >.>

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                            • phe0nixblade
                              Praise the sun mofo
                              • Sep 2005
                              • 4281

                              #15
                              Re: Angel? lol

                              god damn you're good
                              even more reason to say hi to you when i see you randomly on the site

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