Japanese Dude

**dietsnapple135** · 10-20-2008, 06:48 PM

Re: Japanese Dude

I think his ears look a tad funky.

**Mahjix** · 10-20-2008, 06:48 PM

Re: Japanese Dude

Thank you! I will fix that! :}

**EnedersXgame** · 10-20-2008, 06:52 PM

Re: Japanese Dude

check your light source the shadows look a bit made up. More contrast good over all

**funmonkey54** · 10-20-2008, 06:52 PM

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Absolutely amazing!
The only thing I can see that could be changed is the butterfly. The design on its visible wing is slightly bumpy and kind of pixelated around the white patchs' edges.

**Afrobean** · 10-20-2008, 06:53 PM

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It looks like he only has 3 fingers. Looks like he's got no index finger, no thumb.

And they're held in an awkward position on top of that.

**Mahjix** · 10-20-2008, 07:11 PM

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The light source is front of him.
Pixelated butterfly wing is not in full resolution (I up-ed the sharpness when it shrunk to gain lost detail)
He's holding the butterflies wings in between his index and middle finger. I will add more indication of his index finger.

So nothing's wrong with his face? xDD
I used this for reference but I added a lot of my own elements to make it my own character.

**Raveren** · 10-20-2008, 07:15 PM

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Oi, as mentioned fingers are freaky, the ears are very subtle, so they could either be more defined or hidden more.

To add on, the smiley patch doesn't seem to fit in to me, but that may just be me.

In before Souseiki.

*edit* ah...maybe something about the eyebrows. His right one seems to extend to far, if anything. Then the contrast between the two may be a bit much, his right is bold and black while the left is vaguely transparent and redish.

**EnedersXgame** · 10-20-2008, 07:16 PM

Re: Japanese Dude

Originally posted by Mahjix

The light source is front of him.
Pixelated butterfly wing is not in full resolution (I up-ed the sharpness when it shrunk to gain lost detail)
He's holding the butterflies wings in between his index and middle finger. I will add more indication of his index finger.

So nothing's wrong with his face? xDD
I used this for reference but I added a lot of my own elements to make it my own character.

only thing I can say is sharpen the contrast

**kommisar[os]** · 10-20-2008, 07:24 PM

Re: Japanese Dude

his shirt is priceless haha. fingers would be the only flaw i see that is obvious to the un-artistic mind

**L0NEvvolf** · 10-20-2008, 07:34 PM

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I didn't notice anything bad with it because I was to amazed at how good it looked.

**Mahjix** · 10-20-2008, 07:34 PM

Re: Japanese Dude

Alright, I added some changes including the finger, contrast, and ears. :}

**Raveren** · 10-20-2008, 07:41 PM

Re: Japanese Dude

The idle fingers still sorta look like they're in an uncomfortable position...I had to strain to get my ring finger to bend exactly like that

**Mahjix** · 10-20-2008, 07:43 PM

Re: Japanese Dude

I actually posed my hand, took a picture and drew what I saw xDD No problems on this side. :}

EDIT

Originally posted by Raveren

*edit* ah...maybe something about the eyebrows. His right one seems to extend to far, if anything. Then the contrast between the two may be a bit much, his right is bold and black while the left is vaguely transparent and redish.

Extend too far? The eyebrow extends beyond the edge of your eye. What do you mean?
Also, I'll take away the red from the left one.

EDIT2
Added v3

**Waffl3** · 10-20-2008, 08:02 PM

Re: Japanese Dude

I think it looks amazing, but the smiley face on his shirt is kinda dumb imo.

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