A Life Without Sorrow

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  • kommisar[os]
    Banned
    • Apr 2006
    • 4097

    #1

    A Life Without Sorrow

    I wrote this in English class 2 years ago, so the spelling/grammar might not be top notch (i'm french also)


    A Life Without Sorrow

    We all live this life together, whether it be unfair or not. Some of the greatest moments are seen, some of pain and sorrow. For some life is but a dream. They sometimes try to escape from reality. Those who were cowards in life, not brave enough to live life truly.

    Without dreams how can one reach for the stars above? Without love how can you feel the passion to live? Without challenges life wouldn't be worth fighting for. As unfair as it seems, everything happens for a reason. If one doesn't feel pain or sadness, one cannot discover the joys of a happy ending.

    Joy is the calm after the storm. Through hard times life is never forgiving. Challenges make life interesting, adds spice to existence. It's such a triumphant feeling to discover happiness again.

    A life without sorrow would have no place for the climax of joy


    -Christophe Goulet-LeBlanc
    Last edited by kommisar[os]; 10-19-2008, 03:41 PM.
  • robertsona
    missa in h-moll
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Dec 2006
    • 3997

    #2
    Re: A Life Without Sorrow

    the only error i saw is weather which should be whether
    lol

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    • kommisar[os]
      Banned
      • Apr 2006
      • 4097

      #3
      Re: A Life Without Sorrow

      i keep messing those two up haha thanks

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      • rzr
        TWG Veteran
        • Oct 2007
        • 7608

        #4
        Re: A Life Without Sorrow

        I like it. It's like, I was just getting yelled at by my mom and I read that. It's upbeat and makes you happy, but only if you can understand it. I'd like to see more of your works if you have them.

        Originally posted by darkshark
        Everyone sucks at this game. The second you think you're good is the second you stop trying to get better.
        Originally posted by aperson
        i had a mri the other day it was the best song i heard in years

        Originally posted by Sprite-
        More of a joke than the time I deleted all the credits on the site.
        Originally posted by MinaciousGrace
        yeah my goldfish think im a riot they do this thing where they turn upside down and float to the top of the tank

        i guess their alcohol tolerance isnt as high as mine

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        • Flaming_Dingleberry
          Everybody gets one.
          • Jul 2006
          • 1008

          #5
          Re: A Life Without Sorrow

          It's a bunch of sayings put in paragraph form, but I like that each saying makes sense.
          Last edited by Flaming_Dingleberry; 11-13-2008, 06:55 PM. Reason: I only changed one word, stop asking me why I edited ;_;
          ~ 2nd Official FFR Gamewhore

          ~ 1st Official FFR Butthole

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