Alright, just to warn you there's swearing in this story I'm writing. So, If you're offended by that then this is not a story for you.
Basically my story is about; drugs, fighting, murder, sex, and four teenagers named Lily, Brandon, Amanda, and Justin.

Lily lives with her dad who works as a police officer. Her mother left a long time ago and everytime Lily brings her up, none of her family wants to talk about it. That is until she finds out about her druggie step-sister and makes a deal with her. Get her step-sister, Jen, the drugs she needs and in return Jen will let her know what is really going on with their mother. The only thing is, Jen has some debts to a gang. Unluckily for Lily, if she wants to find out about her mother, she'll have to safe her step sister first. And the only way they will let those debts clear is if she does certain jobs for them. Blackmail? Brandon thinks so.
But for Brandon, he's not really a friend to Lily. He's more of a... follower. Lily would love it if Brandon would leave her alone and stop trying to figure out what she's up to. Even his parents want him to stop hanging around her, but Brandon is determined to find out and try to help. Can he even help her? Or should he just stay away? Amanda seems to be in the same dilemma, but with someone else.
All Amanda wants to do is get Justin to stop fighting and actually listen to the doctors. Ever since they met a few years ago, she wants to tell him how much she likes him, but how can she when he barely notices what she's saying? Her parents don't help much either. Her mom is too much like a teenager while she barely talks to her dad. The only thing that makes her feel better for a few mintues is her job that she's been hiding. But how long can she hide when a girl who goes to the same school as her (Lily) has a job of her own that ties into Amanda's life.
Lastly there is Justin. Fighting, smoking, and pretending not the care about the expiry on his life. Everyday he seems to find life isn't as interesting as he wishes. Especially since he can't feel pain, thanks to his rare case of CIPA. His single mother is thankful that he's still alive, while the doctors are surprised, and Justin is just bored. How can you live without feeling pain? Can he live his life out, or try to turn his boring life more exciting when he finds out about Lily and the jobs she must do.
Chapter 1
Please tell me what you think!
Thanks.
Paig~
Basically my story is about; drugs, fighting, murder, sex, and four teenagers named Lily, Brandon, Amanda, and Justin.

Lily lives with her dad who works as a police officer. Her mother left a long time ago and everytime Lily brings her up, none of her family wants to talk about it. That is until she finds out about her druggie step-sister and makes a deal with her. Get her step-sister, Jen, the drugs she needs and in return Jen will let her know what is really going on with their mother. The only thing is, Jen has some debts to a gang. Unluckily for Lily, if she wants to find out about her mother, she'll have to safe her step sister first. And the only way they will let those debts clear is if she does certain jobs for them. Blackmail? Brandon thinks so.
But for Brandon, he's not really a friend to Lily. He's more of a... follower. Lily would love it if Brandon would leave her alone and stop trying to figure out what she's up to. Even his parents want him to stop hanging around her, but Brandon is determined to find out and try to help. Can he even help her? Or should he just stay away? Amanda seems to be in the same dilemma, but with someone else.
All Amanda wants to do is get Justin to stop fighting and actually listen to the doctors. Ever since they met a few years ago, she wants to tell him how much she likes him, but how can she when he barely notices what she's saying? Her parents don't help much either. Her mom is too much like a teenager while she barely talks to her dad. The only thing that makes her feel better for a few mintues is her job that she's been hiding. But how long can she hide when a girl who goes to the same school as her (Lily) has a job of her own that ties into Amanda's life.
Lastly there is Justin. Fighting, smoking, and pretending not the care about the expiry on his life. Everyday he seems to find life isn't as interesting as he wishes. Especially since he can't feel pain, thanks to his rare case of CIPA. His single mother is thankful that he's still alive, while the doctors are surprised, and Justin is just bored. How can you live without feeling pain? Can he live his life out, or try to turn his boring life more exciting when he finds out about Lily and the jobs she must do.
Chapter 1
Please tell me what you think!
Thanks.Paig~





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