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  • u84
    FFR Veteran
    • Jul 2006
    • 1921
    #1

    Electric Fingers

    Today in Honors Sophomore Writing, we had to write a metaphoric poem about ANYTHING. This is the first thing that came to my head and I had the whole thing written and edited in about five minutes. I thought I'd share.

    Electric Fingers
    FFR is electricity running through the fingers.
    Every arrow,
    A jolt of suspense.
    A run of Perfects,
    Flowing a current continuous.
    Interrupted by a Miss,
    Threatening flashes of darkness.
    Straying from the light,
    Farther with every Miss.
    It takes all night,
    The darkness overwhelming.
    But an arrow revived the light,
    And now the power's back on
    You've joined humanity again.
    Only to the next day become a slave
    To FFR's electric arrows never-end.



    Last edited by u84; 09-4-2008, 10:05 PM.
    Originally posted by ryanisadouche
    I woke up this morning wearing my new ffr shirt which confused me.

    Then i remembered i found the package last night while drunk and put it on in excitement, then immediately passed out.


    Last edited by: Tasselfoot; 7 minutes ago. Reason: I am your MILF.
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    • Breakdown16
      FFR Veteran
      • Sep 2007
      • 1938
      #2
      Re: Electric Fingers

      Heh heh, it does actually accurately describe how playing FFR feels. Normally, I would suggest against writing about a computer game for a writing topic in school, but this is meaningful.


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        • Psychotik
          Heckin' Cute
          FFR Simfile Author
          • Jan 2008
          • 1727
          #3
          Re: Electric Fingers

          This is the only poem I ever understood. It's sweet.
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            • PsYcHoZeRoSk8eR
              Threat Emulation
              FFR Simfile Author
              • May 2004
              • 5184
              #4
              Re: Electric Fingers

              Pretty good.

              Originally posted by Lightdarkness
              I'm light f**king darkness

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                • FrozenAngel91
                  FFR Player
                  • Aug 2007
                  • 1029
                  #5
                  Re: Electric Fingers

                  I like this poem actually, it's sorta interesting how you do an atmospheric change to invoke a good, or a bad feeling, and work it into playing FFR.

                  Good job.


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                    • u84
                      FFR Veteran
                      • Jul 2006
                      • 1921
                      #6
                      Re: Electric Fingers

                      Thanks for the criticism, guys. Keep it coming maybe?
                      Originally posted by ryanisadouche
                      I woke up this morning wearing my new ffr shirt which confused me.

                      Then i remembered i found the package last night while drunk and put it on in excitement, then immediately passed out.


                      Last edited by: Tasselfoot; 7 minutes ago. Reason: I am your MILF.

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                        • AOD_ELEMENT
                          FFR Player
                          • Jan 2007
                          • 1672
                          #7
                          Re: Electric Fingers

                          nice dude how long did that take?

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                            • u84
                              FFR Veteran
                              • Jul 2006
                              • 1921
                              #8
                              Re: Electric Fingers

                              Literally I wrote it and edited things in five minutes.
                              Originally posted by ryanisadouche
                              I woke up this morning wearing my new ffr shirt which confused me.

                              Then i remembered i found the package last night while drunk and put it on in excitement, then immediately passed out.


                              Last edited by: Tasselfoot; 7 minutes ago. Reason: I am your MILF.

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                                • Plan_Bsk81127
                                  snooches
                                  FFR Simfile Author
                                  • Aug 2007
                                  • 6420
                                  #9
                                  Re: Electric Fingers

                                  Wow, one poem I actually understood and enjoy'd reading.

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