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  • shini-gama
    FFR Player
    • Nov 2006
    • 13

    #1

    My Simple Poetry...

    So I Made a Few poems.. Hope You Enjoy!
    If You Know of Me And Or Have Visited My profile Then You would know I have all of these and alot more poems Up.
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    "Thought Of Life"

    In The Thought Of Life..
    There Is Always A Mistake...
    For These People Have It..
    Until It Is Their Last Breath To Take...
    The Thought Of Life..
    And Its Working Wonders...
    Always Make Me Satisfied..
    Away From My Ponders..
    The Thought Of Life..
    For The Fate In The End..
    No One Can Hide..
    Laws I Wish To Bend...

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    "Death"

    Ripped From The Socket..
    My Feelings Set Free...
    Cast Out From The Locket..
    Nothing Left To See...

    Banned From The Life...
    Forever Not To Gain...
    Frightful Of The Knife..
    Forever With The Pain...

    The Truth May Hold...
    My Fate is Sealed...
    The Pain Too Bold..
    To Die Unrevealed...

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    "Gothic Ballerina

    In the Shadows of this Stage...
    Lurks the Gothic Ballerina...
    One step on stage...
    She is sealed forever...

    The Dance of Life and Death...
    Her Performance so Elegant...
    Her Beauty is terrifying...
    Her Dreams so far from reach..

    She is alone..
    She does not belong...
    Abstract from the stage..
    She stands out of Place..

    The Wrong partner comes..
    Uses her with mighty strength...
    Her Performance was disgraced..
    The Show must End or Regain..

    I am Trapped Within My Lies...
    My Heart Has Fallen....
    The Breath Within me Ceased...
    My Mind is Closed..

    The Performance is Gone..
    Vanished in The light..
    The Stage is Empty and Gone...
    The Lights Are Dim and Dead...
    "In My Eyes"

    In my eyes..
    The world Is a mess of chaos and destruction
    In the world's eyes it's as peaceful as it can get


    In my eyes..
    the world is full of criminals and deceivers
    In the world's eyes all they see are people


    In my eyes..
    No one cares
    In the world's eyes they don't bother
  • tuv
    FFR Player
    • Jun 2006
    • 188

    #2
    Re: My Simple Poetry...

    gothic balerina is the best

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    • robertsona
      missa in h-moll
      FFR Simfile Author
      • Dec 2006
      • 3997

      #3
      Re: My Simple Poetry...

      don't put ... at the end of every line, haha

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      • shini-gama
        FFR Player
        • Nov 2006
        • 13

        #4
        Re: My Simple Poetry...

        HaHa?
        Umm Well I Do Its out Of Habit..
        "In My Eyes"

        In my eyes..
        The world Is a mess of chaos and destruction
        In the world's eyes it's as peaceful as it can get


        In my eyes..
        the world is full of criminals and deceivers
        In the world's eyes all they see are people


        In my eyes..
        No one cares
        In the world's eyes they don't bother

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        • robertsona
          missa in h-moll
          FFR Simfile Author
          • Dec 2006
          • 3997

          #5
          Re: My Simple Poetry...

          habit you have to break. makes your poems not flow well.

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          • shini-gama
            FFR Player
            • Nov 2006
            • 13

            #6
            Re: My Simple Poetry...

            Okay.
            Last edited by shini-gama; 08-31-2008, 12:56 PM. Reason: I'm Special Like That..
            "In My Eyes"

            In my eyes..
            The world Is a mess of chaos and destruction
            In the world's eyes it's as peaceful as it can get


            In my eyes..
            the world is full of criminals and deceivers
            In the world's eyes all they see are people


            In my eyes..
            No one cares
            In the world's eyes they don't bother

            Comment

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