Destruction of Stonehenge (poem)

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  • igotrhythm
    Fractals!
    • Sep 2004
    • 6535

    #1

    Destruction of Stonehenge (poem)

    I wrote this when I was 16, in the first month after 9/11. Hope you like it as much as the International Society of Poets did when I sent it to them a few years back (back then it was just called "Stonehenge", though). XD

    Whenever I get caught remembering,
    I only say, "It disallows my sleep."
    For the experience was harrowing;
    To see the rocks fall in a giant heap.

    The wind, the lightning and the thunder too
    Created storms that were not only rain.
    Instead, the hail impacted, swift and true,
    On megaliths that stood upon the plain.

    These stones had been positioned quite exact
    So one could measure where the stars might be.
    (And some astrologers might use such fact
    To make a buck off curiosity.)

    This generation, held back way too far,
    Must prove to itself what it thinks they are.
    Originally posted by thesunfan
    I literally spent 10 minutes in the library looking for the TWG forum on Smogon and couldn't find it what the fuck is this witchcraft IGR
  • Adamaja456
    Absurd
    • Dec 2006
    • 6433

    #2
    Re: Destruction of Stonehenge (poem)

    very nice. good use of imagery


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