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  • MalReynolds
    CHOCK FULL O' NUTRIENTS
    • Sep 2003
    • 6571
    #1

    No Pain

    The door jamb would think quietly to itself,
    Envious of the books high upon the shelf.

    "Why do I sit here, constanty mopin'?"
    To be curtly reminded when the door slammed open.
    Last edited by MalReynolds; 08-26-2008, 01:34 PM.
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    • AL81
      FFR Player
      • Nov 2007
      • 21
      #2
      Re: No Pain

      These couplets just made my day. It's refreshing to read humor so indirectly stated within a poem.

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        • Sullyman2007
          FFR Player
          • Jan 2007
          • 1663
          #3
          Re: No Pain

          I don't really know much about poetic devices or any of that suff, but I will say that I like it. It's a nice read.

          Also why don't the good threads ever get bumped. The ****ty ones always flourish while the real gems are left in the dust.

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            • mead1
              Cerebellumberjack
              FFR Simfile Author
              • Aug 2003
              • 3960
              #4
              Re: No Pain

              The mottled books did envy the jamb,
              even as the giant door did slam.

              Hoping someday to jiggle loose,
              so at last they'd see some use.

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