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  • Mans0n
    Sun and Stars
    FFR Music Producer
    • Sep 2006
    • 2907

    #1

    Everything Before All

    Check out my latest hit!
    sounds really awesome to me (since I made it) but yeah. This is just the first draft of the song. Im gona eventually edit it and make it longer. so yeah tell me what you think of it so far and please vote and write reviews!. http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/164646
    thanks,
    Mans0n

    EDIT: remix of the song
    http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/164730
    Last edited by Mans0n; 08-11-2008, 08:46 PM.
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  • Verruckter
    FFR Player
    • Apr 2004
    • 2707

    #2
    Re: Everything Before All

    Ehhh I don't really know this style of music... but nothing is happening in the song. It's as if it was always building up for something but it never came to it... And please, don't leave empty bars.
    Truth lies in loneliness, When hope is long gone by -Blind Guardian, The Soulforged
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    • Mans0n
      Sun and Stars
      FFR Music Producer
      • Sep 2006
      • 2907

      #3
      Re: Everything Before All

      wtf.. There is no empty bars, your crazy bro.
      and it built up for the melody that i made, duhh.
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      • OnixRose
        FFR Player
        • Aug 2006
        • 1023

        #4
        Re: Everything Before All

        I dunno seems like a lot of the songs people upload to newgrounds seem to be too generic and lack pizazz

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        FFR should implement a form of CAPTCHA that filters out not only spambots but also retards.

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        • Verruckter
          FFR Player
          • Apr 2004
          • 2707

          #5
          Re: Everything Before All

          Originally posted by Mans0n
          wtf.. There is no empty bars, your crazy bro.
          and it built up for the melody that i made, duhh.
          Yeah in the middle, there's only the drum.. at it does the exact same thing as it did before so it's pretty much totally empty.

          As I said, there is no real climax to what you're building up to. It's another melody, but really it's not so interesting.
          Truth lies in loneliness, When hope is long gone by -Blind Guardian, The Soulforged
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          • Mans0n
            Sun and Stars
            FFR Music Producer
            • Sep 2006
            • 2907

            #6
            Re: Everything Before All

            Originally posted by Verruckter
            Yeah in the middle, there's only the drum.. at it does the exact same thing as it did before so it's pretty much totally empty.

            As I said, there is no real climax to what you're building up to. It's another melody, but really it's not so interesting.
            ''the drum''? im pretty sure there atleast 3 or 4 going on, you cant really hear them well though. and if you would be specific and say where. and not just the middle, i can get this song mastered and rerelease it.
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            • Emo_Saur_
              FFR Veteran
              • Feb 2007
              • 2952

              #7
              Re: Everything Before All

              Originally posted by Verruckter
              climax

              He said climax.


              Yeah, the song is so-so.
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              • Verruckter
                FFR Player
                • Apr 2004
                • 2707

                #8
                Re: Everything Before All

                Originally posted by Mans0n
                ''the drum''? im pretty sure there atleast 3 or 4 going on, you cant really hear them well though. and if you would be specific and say where. and not just the middle, i can get this song mastered and rerelease it.
                At about 30 seconds into the song.
                Truth lies in loneliness, When hope is long gone by -Blind Guardian, The Soulforged
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                • Mans0n
                  Sun and Stars
                  FFR Music Producer
                  • Sep 2006
                  • 2907

                  #9
                  Re: Everything Before All

                  I see what your talking about.. but still its not ''empty'' because you can here the drum rolling sound..
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                  • Verruckter
                    FFR Player
                    • Apr 2004
                    • 2707

                    #10
                    Re: Everything Before All

                    Originally posted by Mans0n
                    I see what your talking about.. but still its not ''empty'' because you can here the drum rolling sound..
                    Yeah, the drum is there, but it has no effect, it gives no mod, no emotion, nothing.. it's empty, it doesn't amound to anything. There is no variation, a fill, or something to add to an emphasis or something like that.
                    Truth lies in loneliness, When hope is long gone by -Blind Guardian, The Soulforged
                    Image removed for size violation.

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                    • Cyanite
                      SIT THE **** DOWN.
                      FFR Simfile Author
                      • Feb 2007
                      • 1174

                      #11
                      Re: Everything Before All

                      empty doesn't necessarially imply silence.

                      All you did was take away the first synth, leave the percussion for a while, and then introduce the next synth. If you're going to do that, change it up, make it interesting, rather than just build up to nothing. A climax implies that there was something leading into it, and you literally did the opposite -- you took away from the beginning section and then the next section was just.. there, rather than any kind of transition or lead-in.


                      Originally posted by KgZ
                      oh yeah girls love it when I stick my massive arm in their mouth

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                      • iPatcH
                        Swamp Lemons Rule
                        FFR Simfile Author
                        FFR Music Producer
                        • Dec 2004
                        • 3370

                        #12
                        Re: Everything Before All

                        Didn't read any of the above comments but:

                        The song was pretty empty. It felt like it kept building up to something that never happened and the song is incredibly redundant and somewhat dissonant in an unpleasing way. Go back, work out some actual progressions, give it a decent bassline and structure, because this song literally sounds like three loops crammed together.
                        put on a donk on it

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                        • funmonkey54
                          The Chill Keeper
                          • Oct 2007
                          • 4127

                          #13
                          Re: Everything Before All

                          Sounds, well, bland. Not much substance. Just a bunch of sounds thrown together.

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                          • MooMoo_Cowfreak
                            Abraxas Hydroplane
                            • May 2006
                            • 1746

                            #14
                            Re: Everything Before All

                            Booooooring. And at the end you have some god-awful dissonance.
                            Originally posted by hi19hi19
                            dumps abstractly represent the song with arrows

                            post-dumps abstractly represent the existential nihilism that the song invokes in the listener with negative space, evoking the ephemeral nature of the mind - the journey of stepmania begins in hope yet soon becomes corroded into a dialectic of futility, leaving only a sense of dread and the unlikelihood of a new synthesis

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                            • foilman8805
                              smoke wheat hail satin
                              FFR Simfile Author
                              • Sep 2006
                              • 5704

                              #15
                              Re: Everything Before All

                              dis is bad bro just like your ma

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