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  • Mans0n
    Sun and Stars
    FFR Music Producer
    • Sep 2006
    • 2907
    #1

    Everything Before All

    Check out my latest hit!
    sounds really awesome to me (since I made it) but yeah. This is just the first draft of the song. Im gona eventually edit it and make it longer. so yeah tell me what you think of it so far and please vote and write reviews!. http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/164646
    thanks,
    Mans0n

    EDIT: remix of the song
    http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/164730
    Last edited by Mans0n; 08-11-2008, 08:46 PM.
    http://www.facebook.com/?ref=logo#!/Br0wnbread



    Check out my band profile and give it a like! :P
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    • Verruckter
      FFR Player
      • Apr 2004
      • 2707
      #2
      Re: Everything Before All

      Ehhh I don't really know this style of music... but nothing is happening in the song. It's as if it was always building up for something but it never came to it... And please, don't leave empty bars.
      Truth lies in loneliness, When hope is long gone by -Blind Guardian, The Soulforged
      Image removed for size violation.

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        • Mans0n
          Sun and Stars
          FFR Music Producer
          • Sep 2006
          • 2907
          #3
          Re: Everything Before All

          wtf.. There is no empty bars, your crazy bro.
          and it built up for the melody that i made, duhh.
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            • OnixRose
              FFR Player
              • Aug 2006
              • 1023
              #4
              Re: Everything Before All

              I dunno seems like a lot of the songs people upload to newgrounds seem to be too generic and lack pizazz

              1000% supporter of FFR character additions
              Originally posted by leonid
              FFR should implement a form of CAPTCHA that filters out not only spambots but also retards.

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                • Verruckter
                  FFR Player
                  • Apr 2004
                  • 2707
                  #5
                  Re: Everything Before All

                  Originally posted by Mans0n
                  wtf.. There is no empty bars, your crazy bro.
                  and it built up for the melody that i made, duhh.
                  Yeah in the middle, there's only the drum.. at it does the exact same thing as it did before so it's pretty much totally empty.

                  As I said, there is no real climax to what you're building up to. It's another melody, but really it's not so interesting.
                  Truth lies in loneliness, When hope is long gone by -Blind Guardian, The Soulforged
                  Image removed for size violation.

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                    • Mans0n
                      Sun and Stars
                      FFR Music Producer
                      • Sep 2006
                      • 2907
                      #6
                      Re: Everything Before All

                      Originally posted by Verruckter
                      Yeah in the middle, there's only the drum.. at it does the exact same thing as it did before so it's pretty much totally empty.

                      As I said, there is no real climax to what you're building up to. It's another melody, but really it's not so interesting.
                      ''the drum''? im pretty sure there atleast 3 or 4 going on, you cant really hear them well though. and if you would be specific and say where. and not just the middle, i can get this song mastered and rerelease it.
                      http://www.facebook.com/?ref=logo#!/Br0wnbread



                      Check out my band profile and give it a like! :P

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                        • Emo_Saur_
                          FFR Veteran
                          • Feb 2007
                          • 2952
                          #7
                          Re: Everything Before All

                          Originally posted by Verruckter
                          climax

                          He said climax.


                          Yeah, the song is so-so.
                          sigpic

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                            • Verruckter
                              FFR Player
                              • Apr 2004
                              • 2707
                              #8
                              Re: Everything Before All

                              Originally posted by Mans0n
                              ''the drum''? im pretty sure there atleast 3 or 4 going on, you cant really hear them well though. and if you would be specific and say where. and not just the middle, i can get this song mastered and rerelease it.
                              At about 30 seconds into the song.
                              Truth lies in loneliness, When hope is long gone by -Blind Guardian, The Soulforged
                              Image removed for size violation.

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                                • Mans0n
                                  Sun and Stars
                                  FFR Music Producer
                                  • Sep 2006
                                  • 2907
                                  #9
                                  Re: Everything Before All

                                  I see what your talking about.. but still its not ''empty'' because you can here the drum rolling sound..
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                                    • Verruckter
                                      FFR Player
                                      • Apr 2004
                                      • 2707
                                      #10
                                      Re: Everything Before All

                                      Originally posted by Mans0n
                                      I see what your talking about.. but still its not ''empty'' because you can here the drum rolling sound..
                                      Yeah, the drum is there, but it has no effect, it gives no mod, no emotion, nothing.. it's empty, it doesn't amound to anything. There is no variation, a fill, or something to add to an emphasis or something like that.
                                      Truth lies in loneliness, When hope is long gone by -Blind Guardian, The Soulforged
                                      Image removed for size violation.

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                                        • Cyanite
                                          SIT THE **** DOWN.
                                          FFR Simfile Author
                                          • Feb 2007
                                          • 1174
                                          #11
                                          Re: Everything Before All

                                          empty doesn't necessarially imply silence.

                                          All you did was take away the first synth, leave the percussion for a while, and then introduce the next synth. If you're going to do that, change it up, make it interesting, rather than just build up to nothing. A climax implies that there was something leading into it, and you literally did the opposite -- you took away from the beginning section and then the next section was just.. there, rather than any kind of transition or lead-in.


                                          Originally posted by KgZ
                                          oh yeah girls love it when I stick my massive arm in their mouth

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                                            • iPatcH
                                              Swamp Lemons Rule
                                              FFR Simfile Author
                                              FFR Music Producer
                                              • Dec 2004
                                              • 3370
                                              #12
                                              Re: Everything Before All

                                              Didn't read any of the above comments but:

                                              The song was pretty empty. It felt like it kept building up to something that never happened and the song is incredibly redundant and somewhat dissonant in an unpleasing way. Go back, work out some actual progressions, give it a decent bassline and structure, because this song literally sounds like three loops crammed together.
                                              put on a donk on it

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                                                • funmonkey54
                                                  The Chill Keeper
                                                  • Oct 2007
                                                  • 4127
                                                  #13
                                                  Re: Everything Before All

                                                  Sounds, well, bland. Not much substance. Just a bunch of sounds thrown together.

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                                                    • MooMoo_Cowfreak
                                                      Abraxas Hydroplane
                                                      • May 2006
                                                      • 1746
                                                      #14
                                                      Re: Everything Before All

                                                      Booooooring. And at the end you have some god-awful dissonance.
                                                      Originally posted by hi19hi19
                                                      dumps abstractly represent the song with arrows

                                                      post-dumps abstractly represent the existential nihilism that the song invokes in the listener with negative space, evoking the ephemeral nature of the mind - the journey of stepmania begins in hope yet soon becomes corroded into a dialectic of futility, leaving only a sense of dread and the unlikelihood of a new synthesis

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                                                        • foilman8805
                                                          smoke wheat hail satin
                                                          FFR Simfile Author
                                                          • Sep 2006
                                                          • 5704
                                                          #15
                                                          Re: Everything Before All

                                                          dis is bad bro just like your ma

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