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  • Gibson63
    FFR Veteran
    • Jan 2007
    • 1319
    #1

    My Name Is Dj Waterfront,I Give You My Music.

    Hey so yeah my name is Gibson63 here, its been 1 years and a half... but my nickname in other website is Waterfront.

    So i just started my first attempt at making music, i ended up with a song,
    i think its kinda cool for my FIRST ATTEMPT ever.

    if anyone would like to step it, i would be SO happy^^ give me your feedback please

    Dj Waterfront (CAN) – Techno Music | Free MP3 Downloads | 1 Songs
    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=857657
    Discover Dj Waterfront (CAN), an independent techno artist on SoundClick. A growing catalog of 1 tracks and 304 streams on SoundClick.
    Last edited by Gibson63; 07-24-2008, 07:18 PM.


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    • EnR
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      FFR Simfile Author
      • Jul 2007
      • 8431
      #2
      Re: My Name Is Dj Waterfront,I Give You My Music.

      Little repetitive :/
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        • Gibson63
          FFR Veteran
          • Jan 2007
          • 1319
          #3
          Re: My Name Is Dj Waterfront,I Give You My Music.

          lol aww... its my first attempt so... normally..techno is a lot repetitive.. anyway.. if anyone like it and would like to step it.. that would be cool


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            • EnR
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              • Jul 2007
              • 8431
              #4
              Re: My Name Is Dj Waterfront,I Give You My Music.

              that's the problem, wouldn;t make for very good steps. :/
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                • Gibson63
                  FFR Veteran
                  • Jan 2007
                  • 1319
                  #5
                  Re: My Name Is Dj Waterfront,I Give You My Music.

                  maybe if i do a transition and change the font beat ? like in the middle of the song

                  EDIT: ill modify the song a little bit. ill let you know
                  Last edited by Gibson63; 07-24-2008, 04:52 PM.


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                    • hi19hi19
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                      • Oct 2005
                      • 12194
                      #6
                      Re: My Name Is Dj Waterfront,I Give You My Music.

                      I'll honor you a decent review, but I'll be honest: this is not good enough to go in FFR, period.

                      Nice beat on the start, but all the percussion is a little too "wet". Needs more definition.
                      "BeBeBeBeBeat Control" needs something to make it not sound like it was recorded with a tin can. Echo, fade, some kind of voice synth, anything.
                      The beat that kicks in at 0:43 is actually really good. The one high point of the song IMO.

                      The rest of the song is just the same beat, with a really lame "zip zip zip" sound going on. Hugely repetetive and has no hook at all.


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                        • WhyCry
                          FFR Veteran
                          • Mar 2007
                          • 186
                          #7
                          Re: My Name Is Dj Waterfront,I Give You My Music.

                          Not bad, its somewhat repetitive, but it adds on throughout the song. I enjoyed it, I would give it about a 8/10.

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                            • infinity.
                              FFR Veteran
                              • Sep 2007
                              • 1701
                              #8
                              Re: My Name Is Dj Waterfront,I Give You My Music.

                              you sure did control that beat. :P

                              The one part that really makes a techno song is the climax, the point where everything shifts and makes it awesome, your song kind of stayed the same, it had one point where there was a small alteration, but nothing that was exciting to hear,

                              but for a first song it was good.
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                                • jugglinguy
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                                  • Dec 2006
                                  • 4319
                                  #9
                                  Re: My Name Is Dj Waterfront,I Give You My Music.

                                  Originally posted by Gibson63
                                  techno is a lot repetitive..
                                  Not good techno.
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                                    • Gibson63
                                      FFR Veteran
                                      • Jan 2007
                                      • 1319
                                      #10
                                      Re: My Name Is Dj Waterfront,I Give You My Music.

                                      KK i did modify it a bit, tell me what you guys think , i tryed to add a catchy beat in the middle of the song and some funny little noise^^
                                      Last edited by Gibson63; 07-24-2008, 07:26 PM.


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                                        • infinity.
                                          FFR Veteran
                                          • Sep 2007
                                          • 1701
                                          #11
                                          Re: My Name Is Dj Waterfront,I Give You My Music.

                                          i like it a lot more haha, it's kinda qwirky and fun, volume distribution is really weird though, and it almost seems to silly,

                                          some sounds were almost overwhelming, like the synth. the snares, kicks, etc were all pretty generic

                                          a few other things i could nitpick, are you still working in ejay?


                                          p.s. the intro was really cool, i just wish you didn't drift off from there,



                                          second look: around :40 you shift between kicks or a bass, it sounds kinda awkward, and it almost feels random sometimes, like 1:39, i see you were trying to make it more interesting, but it didn't really fit how the song was going at the time,

                                          not to hang on to anything, but there was still no climax, at the end though, there is tons of potential to extend the song and add a sick part
                                          Last edited by infinity.; 07-24-2008, 07:39 PM.
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                                            • Gibson63
                                              FFR Veteran
                                              • Jan 2007
                                              • 1319
                                              #12
                                              Re: My Name Is Dj Waterfront,I Give You My Music.

                                              yeah im with Ejay, im a beginner so i wont enter directly into FL...cause i dont know anything in that program.. ( Ejay seems easier...) if anyone could adjust all the volume for me ??? that would be cool , and if you can modify something i forget.. it would be cool too. ask for the .MIX and i'll send it to you

                                              EDIT: since im a beginer, can anybody help me a little bit?? i dont know all the settings available to me i tryed to look for some tutorials..nothing really interisting.. cause i really want to do something for FFR =/
                                              Last edited by Gibson63; 07-24-2008, 07:44 PM.


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                                                • infinity.
                                                  FFR Veteran
                                                  • Sep 2007
                                                  • 1701
                                                  #13
                                                  Re: My Name Is Dj Waterfront,I Give You My Music.

                                                  uhm

                                                  you might as well start in FL, i mean, you'll always be starting out new on FL, you might aswell start as soon as possible.
                                                  just start with it now, and try and find some tutorials
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                                                    • Gibson63
                                                      FFR Veteran
                                                      • Jan 2007
                                                      • 1319
                                                      #14
                                                      Re: My Name Is Dj Waterfront,I Give You My Music.

                                                      well if FL is 5x more complicated, at least can someone link me to LOT of tutorials and somewhere that can show me all the buttons functions? i don't want to open FL and be like..WTF..lol


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                                                        • infinity.
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                                                          • Sep 2007
                                                          • 1701
                                                          #15
                                                          Re: My Name Is Dj Waterfront,I Give You My Music.

                                                          youtube.com
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