Finally made my first stepfile.

I finally got around to making my first sim. It's by no means a masterpiece, and I know this, but I'd very much like to get some honest feedback and constructive criticism on the file. It may have been a bad idea to step something as technical as metal my first time out, but it's pretty much all I listen to, and all I'm interested in stepping as of now.

Here's the download link:

http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...p?songid=28044

I would like to create more sims in the future, but first I need to know what I need to work on before I continue.

Thanks for any comments. Much appreciated.