new song 3ntrance by Sakura080789 and Xerxes

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  • sakura080789
    Rapture Universe
    • Feb 2007
    • 1751

    #1

    new song 3ntrance by Sakura080789 and Xerxes

    Look we made this song and we need feedback seriously please honest feed back we want to know if you like it or if you hate it and you can step it if you want but we need feed back absolute honest feedback...



    here is the link to the song


    http://files.filefront.com/EntranceM.../fileinfo.html
  • retard_gamer
    FFR Player
    • Jan 2007
    • 138

    #2
    Re: new song 3ntrance by Sakura080789 and Xerxes

    i didnt here anyone sing. im totally lost lmao. i like it but i rarely step anything over 2:15 so im not gonna. but it was good. how did you make it?

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    • sleeplessdragn
      ~Bang that beat Harder~
      FFR Simfile Author
      FFR Music Producer
      • Jan 2004
      • 2321

      #3
      Re: new song 3ntrance by Sakura080789 and Xerxes

      Very creative! Though it does sound like an assortment of loops strung together, mostly because there doesn't sound like there is any obvious mixing going on, or any sort of obvious musical theme development that I could recognize.

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      • Doctor_Attitude
        FFR Player
        • Feb 2008
        • 47

        #4
        Re: new song 3ntrance by Sakura080789 and Xerxes

        It's got some good mixing in it, the first real drums that come in seem awkwardly placed... you have a lot of creative effects on the synths lines, but it almost seems like there is too much and the tune itself loses a lot of it's drive.

        It also got a bit boring because of how much the song changed. You didn't seem to really stick to one idea for very long which makes it hard to really sit back and groove to.

        It seems like the entire song changes it every two measures, maybe if try it so it there is a real change every 4 measures? I think the two measures really doesn't let the song settle for very long.

        As sleepless dragon says it sounds like a bunch of loops strung together, I think that's why.

        It's also hurt by not have a main melody of any sort.

        Over all not bad, though.

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        • sakura080789
          Rapture Universe
          • Feb 2007
          • 1751

          #5
          Re: new song 3ntrance by Sakura080789 and Xerxes

          hmm thanks ppl and well i use something called Magix Music Maker
          ps Major Bump lmao

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          • DoctorSerpentine
            Banned
            • Nov 2007
            • 412

            #6
            Re: new song 3ntrance by Sakura080789 and Xerxes

            The problem I see when people use GarageBand or Magix is that they use sort of "random" loops. The song feels good, but
            1. You didn't create it really.
            2. It doesn't have a "theme" or "feel" and keeps changing around.

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            • sakura080789
              Rapture Universe
              • Feb 2007
              • 1751

              #7
              Re: new song 3ntrance by Sakura080789 and Xerxes

              hmm that was our bands first song lol but i have more which keep more on one beat
              my first album is out as well
              here is the link
              http://files.filefront.com/The+Bite+.../fileinfo.html

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