My new poem.

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  • jono2007
    FFR Player
    • Jan 2007
    • 516

    #1

    My new poem.

    I once went to a farm
    Tis where I found a charm
    The night fell velvety
    On the overall levity
    Considering
    I had smoked a
    huge doobie
    which was the charm actually
    oh ****
  • tha Guardians
    MCDC 2011
    • Nov 2006
    • 1680

    #2
    Re: My new poem.

    In before lo....
    I mean... erm,

    Wrong place to put this, bud.

    Originally posted by sonic-fast-fingers
    can someone clarrify what QFT means my friend told me its quit ****ing talking, but im not 100 percent sure

    Originally posted by Synthlight
    I need a car that drives itself completely automated and I want it for free and it needs infinite gas mileage.

    Cheers,

    Synthlight

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    • MagicCarpetRide
      Skware One
      • Jun 2006
      • 1125

      #3
      Re: My new poem.

      That poem sucked...

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      • Zythus
        FFR Player
        • Mar 2007
        • 346

        #4
        Re: My new poem.

        I don't think crude humor is considered funny here.

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        • bluguerrilla
          FFR Player
          FFR Simfile Author
          • Apr 2006
          • 3966

          #5
          Re: My new poem.

          Unless it had been a limerick and even then...

          To have a better effect the 'serious' part of the poem should have been both better and longer and the 'humorous' part both funnier and viler.

          I bet Chaz could wreck your ****.

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          • All_That_Chaz
            Supreme Dictator For Life
            • Apr 2004
            • 5874

            #6
            Re: My new poem.

            There once was a dude on a farm.
            He thought he had a measure of charm.
            .....His name was jono,
            .....He loved to get blotto,
            And **** all the cows in the barn.


            <3 blu
            Last edited by All_That_Chaz; 05-19-2008, 08:54 AM.
            Back to "Back to Earth"
            Originally posted by FoJaR
            dammit chaz
            Originally posted by FoJaR
            god dammit chaz
            Originally posted by MalReynolds
            I bet when you live in a glass house, the temptation to throw stones is magnified strictly because you're not supposed to.

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            • XxXMetalheadXxX
              Lack of faith=disturbing
              • Jan 2008
              • 187

              #7
              Re: My new poem.

              I dont like it.... Try something like this:

              Found in the summernight**
              shining heaven of ecstasy
              thunder kissin twilight**
              the essence of destructive parody...

              Here try this: Make a line that u want to ryme,then make a line that doesnt ryme with the previous line. then the next line you ryme it with the first line. see above for example =) Try that style and once u get used to it ull make awesome poems I bet. It also should be longer.

              XxXmetalheadXxX
              Last edited by XxXMetalheadXxX; 05-19-2008, 08:59 AM. Reason: I had a typo...


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              • bluguerrilla
                FFR Player
                FFR Simfile Author
                • Apr 2006
                • 3966

                #8
                Re: My new poem.

                Laughing out loud at work gets strange looks.

                Thanks Chaz.

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