My new poem.

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  • jono2007
    FFR Player
    • Jan 2007
    • 516
    #1

    My new poem.

    I once went to a farm
    Tis where I found a charm
    The night fell velvety
    On the overall levity
    Considering
    I had smoked a
    huge doobie
    which was the charm actually
    oh ****
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    • tha Guardians
      MCDC 2011
      • Nov 2006
      • 1680
      #2
      Re: My new poem.

      In before lo....
      I mean... erm,

      Wrong place to put this, bud.

      Originally posted by sonic-fast-fingers
      can someone clarrify what QFT means my friend told me its quit ****ing talking, but im not 100 percent sure

      Originally posted by Synthlight
      I need a car that drives itself completely automated and I want it for free and it needs infinite gas mileage.

      Cheers,

      Synthlight

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        • MagicCarpetRide
          Skware One
          • Jun 2006
          • 1125
          #3
          Re: My new poem.

          That poem sucked...

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            • Zythus
              FFR Player
              • Mar 2007
              • 346
              #4
              Re: My new poem.

              I don't think crude humor is considered funny here.

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                • bluguerrilla
                  FFR Player
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  • Apr 2006
                  • 3966
                  #5
                  Re: My new poem.

                  Unless it had been a limerick and even then...

                  To have a better effect the 'serious' part of the poem should have been both better and longer and the 'humorous' part both funnier and viler.

                  I bet Chaz could wreck your ****.

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                    • All_That_Chaz
                      Supreme Dictator For Life
                      • Apr 2004
                      • 5874
                      #6
                      Re: My new poem.

                      There once was a dude on a farm.
                      He thought he had a measure of charm.
                      .....His name was jono,
                      .....He loved to get blotto,
                      And **** all the cows in the barn.


                      <3 blu
                      Last edited by All_That_Chaz; 05-19-2008, 08:54 AM.
                      Back to "Back to Earth"
                      Originally posted by FoJaR
                      dammit chaz
                      Originally posted by FoJaR
                      god dammit chaz
                      Originally posted by MalReynolds
                      I bet when you live in a glass house, the temptation to throw stones is magnified strictly because you're not supposed to.

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                        • XxXMetalheadXxX
                          Lack of faith=disturbing
                          • Jan 2008
                          • 187
                          #7
                          Re: My new poem.

                          I dont like it.... Try something like this:

                          Found in the summernight**
                          shining heaven of ecstasy
                          thunder kissin twilight**
                          the essence of destructive parody...

                          Here try this: Make a line that u want to ryme,then make a line that doesnt ryme with the previous line. then the next line you ryme it with the first line. see above for example =) Try that style and once u get used to it ull make awesome poems I bet. It also should be longer.

                          XxXmetalheadXxX
                          Last edited by XxXMetalheadXxX; 05-19-2008, 08:59 AM. Reason: I had a typo...


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                            • bluguerrilla
                              FFR Player
                              FFR Simfile Author
                              • Apr 2006
                              • 3966
                              #8
                              Re: My new poem.

                              Laughing out loud at work gets strange looks.

                              Thanks Chaz.

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