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  • Could_Strife007
    FFR Player
    • May 2004
    • 245

    #1

    Just got into tracking, here's my first track XD

    I just got into tracking, downloaded Renoise, and made this loop/song

    Subsection §

    Tell me what you think! >.<

    (Also tell me if the link works o.o)
  • who_cares973
    FFR Player
    • Aug 2006
    • 15407

    #2
    Re: Just got into tracking, here's my first track XD

    file not found =/

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    • UnkownMan
      FFR Player
      • Apr 2007
      • 1569

      #3
      Re: Just got into tracking, here's my first track XD

      The link works. I listened to the song. Very good for your first but next time, please try not to use the same synth sounds over and over again. It got a small bit epetitive. Either way, NICE JOB!
      Originally posted by Choofers
      2/10 smoke weed every other day, what up den
      We are the music makers and we are the dreamers of dreams.

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      • Could_Strife007
        FFR Player
        • May 2004
        • 245

        #4
        Re: Just got into tracking, here's my first track XD

        Originally posted by UnkownMan
        The link works. I listened to the song. Very good for your first but next time, please try not to use the same synth sounds over and over again. It got a small bit epetitive. Either way, NICE JOB!
        Which sound exactly? (What time does it enter the track?) I'll go back and see if I can mix it up

        I guess I don't know how to ask for feedback XD
        Last edited by Could_Strife007; 04-13-2008, 02:48 AM.

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        • UnkownMan
          FFR Player
          • Apr 2007
          • 1569

          #5
          Re: Just got into tracking, here's my first track XD

          Never mind. I listened to it again. You don't need improvements!
          Originally posted by Choofers
          2/10 smoke weed every other day, what up den
          We are the music makers and we are the dreamers of dreams.

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          • Could_Strife007
            FFR Player
            • May 2004
            • 245

            #6
            Re: Just got into tracking, here's my first track XD

            I want to improve though "^-^
            Last edited by Could_Strife007; 04-13-2008, 02:48 AM.

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            • bmah
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              • Oct 2003
              • 8448

              #7
              Re: Just got into tracking, here's my first track XD

              I would consider taking some theory classes. Later, you can take some classes on general composition too.

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              • Could_Strife007
                FFR Player
                • May 2004
                • 245

                #8
                Re: Just got into tracking, here's my first track XD

                I just took a look at the different music courses that I could take over the summer at the College that's across the street from me. Some of the courses start before school ends for me this year (I'm a junior in hs), and others end after school starts in the fall. There were some night class options but I have SAT subject tests coming up so XD........

                I figured out that these two courses are the only possibilities at this particular college for me this summer:
                Music Course 1! 110
                Music Course 2! 120
                haha

                Should I take them or look elsewhere? (I've never taken a college class before lol)
                Last edited by Could_Strife007; 04-13-2008, 03:38 AM.

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                • who_cares973
                  FFR Player
                  • Aug 2006
                  • 15407

                  #9
                  Re: Just got into tracking, here's my first track XD

                  File Not Found

                  The file you have requested could not be accessed because the file could not be found.

                  Requested File: Subsection §.mp3



                  still nothing =/

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                  • Could_Strife007
                    FFR Player
                    • May 2004
                    • 245

                    #10
                    Re: Just got into tracking, here's my first track XD

                    Originally posted by who_cares973
                    File Not Found

                    The file you have requested could not be accessed because the file could not be found.

                    Requested File: Subsection §.mp3
                    I think it was a problem with the '§' that I had in the title
                    This link should work


                    So should I take those classes or what? They seem kinda simplistic but maybe I need to go back to basics o.o........
                    Last edited by Could_Strife007; 04-13-2008, 03:54 AM.

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                    • who_cares973
                      FFR Player
                      • Aug 2006
                      • 15407

                      #11
                      Re: Just got into tracking, here's my first track XD

                      still not working -_-

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                      • Could_Strife007
                        FFR Player
                        • May 2004
                        • 245

                        #12
                        Re: Just got into tracking, here's my first track XD

                        Originally posted by who_cares973
                        still not working -_-
                        Are you using Firefox?

                        It works for me in Firefox 3

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                        • sarahxjane
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                          • Aug 2005
                          • 2109

                          #13
                          Re: Just got into tracking, here's my first track XD

                          Hmm.
                          It's not bad.
                          :]

                          I agree with Unknown, just a few too many synth sounds.
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                          • UnkownMan
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                            • Apr 2007
                            • 1569

                            #14
                            Re: Just got into tracking, here's my first track XD

                            Originally posted by sarahxjane
                            I agree with Unknown
                            OMG! Someone finally agrees with me! Yeah. To much synth. I can take it in small doses, like Daft Punk, but even anyway, I like this track. Include more instruments next time!
                            Originally posted by Choofers
                            2/10 smoke weed every other day, what up den
                            We are the music makers and we are the dreamers of dreams.

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                            • Could_Strife007
                              FFR Player
                              • May 2004
                              • 245

                              #15
                              Re: Just got into tracking, here's my first track XD

                              In this track I used a sampled drum kit from some band (I forget the band lol, got it off thier website), a fuzzy bass wave, a complex triangle wave, a distance square wave, and a flute sample.

                              I would say that's a decent amount of instruments o.O

                              I next time I'll take it one instrument at a time XD
                              Last edited by Could_Strife007; 04-15-2008, 02:04 AM.

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