Azuri gripped her sword with both hands. " you foul ceatures." " you will not take her". The first creature rushed recklessly towards her.
Azuri simply sidestepped the oncoming attack. The feeling of her blade slicing through the creature's warm flesh gave her the feeling of
satisfaction as it instantly dropped dead. The second creatur, growing wise to her potential, simply disappeared. "Seems that's the last of them"
Azuri hought to herself. Suddenly, she felt a sharp painful feeling in her chest, and began running as fast as she could, back to the temple.
After finally arriving, she saw the sight that caused the pain. She quickly ran into the burning temple. Was she too late? As Azuri ran into Sukioni's
room, the last thing she saw, was her baby being whisked away by one of the creatures she had slain mere minutes ago. "No, this cant't be happening" she thought to herself. "SUKIONI!!!" "SUUUKKKIIIOOOONNNNIIIIIIII"!!!!!!!!!!! Azuri dropped to her knees and began to cry.Even though she was a great warrior, the sight of her missing child was too much to handle for any loving mother. Suddenly, she felt something strike the back of her head, and everything went dark.
This is an idea for something that just popped into my head. I would like to actually get further through this but im not too big on how writing works, so i'm not that punctual. any help from all those super good thinkers and story writers would be appreciated. Thanks.
Azuri simply sidestepped the oncoming attack. The feeling of her blade slicing through the creature's warm flesh gave her the feeling of
satisfaction as it instantly dropped dead. The second creatur, growing wise to her potential, simply disappeared. "Seems that's the last of them"
Azuri hought to herself. Suddenly, she felt a sharp painful feeling in her chest, and began running as fast as she could, back to the temple.
After finally arriving, she saw the sight that caused the pain. She quickly ran into the burning temple. Was she too late? As Azuri ran into Sukioni's
room, the last thing she saw, was her baby being whisked away by one of the creatures she had slain mere minutes ago. "No, this cant't be happening" she thought to herself. "SUKIONI!!!" "SUUUKKKIIIOOOONNNNIIIIIIII"!!!!!!!!!!! Azuri dropped to her knees and began to cry.Even though she was a great warrior, the sight of her missing child was too much to handle for any loving mother. Suddenly, she felt something strike the back of her head, and everything went dark.
This is an idea for something that just popped into my head. I would like to actually get further through this but im not too big on how writing works, so i'm not that punctual. any help from all those super good thinkers and story writers would be appreciated. Thanks.
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