[Z//Transcendence] Poem #1

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  • Zythus
    FFR Player
    • Mar 2007
    • 346
    #1

    [Z//Transcendence] Poem #1

    Well, I think it would be interesting to ask of your critique and thoughts and attempts on some of my poems from my notebooks. I don't title my poems, but instead, I just state the importance of idea, which is for you to guess.

    This was on my banner for a while, but I'm changing banners, so take a crack at what you think this poem is talking about, hint, its an object (Yes, thats a very big hint actually)
    ____________________________________
    Reflection of the night soul,
    The emissary of clarity,
    Ceremonious wane of midnight brilliance,
    preluding the dawning blue.
    ____________________________________
    First one to guess the object being described gets 100 credits! Yes, I agree its pretty crappy reward, but I'm a bit starved on credits D:

    Your comments are welcomed along with your opinions. Its freestyle so I guess you can't pin me down saying I failed and violated some poetic form XD
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    • GamerShadow
      FFR Player
      • Oct 2005
      • 2534
      #2
      Re: [Z//Transcendence] Poem #1

      The moon.

      That was my first impression. Well, the poem is short, but it's pretty good, in my opinion. I'm no poet, so I really can't say much in terms of whether it is good or not.
      Note to self Finish.

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        • Zythus
          FFR Player
          • Mar 2007
          • 346
          #3
          Re: [Z//Transcendence] Poem #1

          Nooo waiii =o

          Expected however, the banner practically gave it away as a freebie.
          You have earned 100 credits or 2 and a half plays of FCing {Rose}
          Congratz.

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            • GamerShadow
              FFR Player
              • Oct 2005
              • 2534
              #4
              Re: [Z//Transcendence] Poem #1

              Thanks. It was a random educated guess based on key words. I have never seen your banner. =P
              Note to self Finish.

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                • Zythus
                  FFR Player
                  • Mar 2007
                  • 346
                  #5
                  Re: [Z//Transcendence] Poem #1

                  =P Thanks for making me feel worse. LOL
                  Honestly, I think poems with a bit more abstrusity is worth more than a poem of simplicity with all the key points handed to you on a platter, which it would seem, I have somewhat done so here.

                  Thanks for the feed back. I guess you can call them couplets? I don't believe in the long poems that stretch from China to Canada, I mean, unless you have more than one key for that single topic you are talking about, what the hell, don't waste your time. My cents anyways...
                  Last edited by Zythus; 02-26-2008, 08:18 PM.

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