New song.

Re: New song.

This sucks balls, go die.

But seriously I think its a beautiful song, great melody and it's relaxing yet not boring.

Rated 5! Rank 4.58/5 now

CBR

May I step this, kind sir?

Re: New song.

Of course.
You can step whatever comes out of my whacked up head.

Re: New song.

Right off the bat, it really seems like the bassline isn't apparent enough, and it seems to blend in with the rest of the drums, mainly the bassdrum, making a really, really moshy effect. I really, really don't like it at all. It makes me feel like my speakers are eating my head.

The composing isn't bad at all. I don't feel like the melody is strong enough to truly stand out from the drum and the background chord line. Yes, I understand it's ambient IDM, but that melody needs to stand out more.

Also, I don't feel like the melody is in place enough to really get jammed into the listeners mind. One of the things about making a good, catchy IDM track is setting up the melody so it will be stuck in the head of the listener for DAYS.

Not a bad track at all. You're getting better, there's no doubt about that.

Re: New song.

I personally want more variety for the melody line, nice song nonetheless.

keep it up.

also, "Musicians' Jungle Gym" forum would be better for this IMO.

Re: New song.

Jesus, it's like Venetian Snares! I'll look at some of your others if you have any!